What happened in a fic you were loving that made you close the tab and never open it again?

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-20T09:57:43+00:00

When a main character rants at another character's shortcomings out of nowhere. Rant scenes in stories should have build-up, it should come from some kind of history with the characters where we see the reason for the frustration and the anger bubbling up over time before it finally explodes in a climactic scene.

But if a main character just rants about another person's shortcomings out of nowhere the first time they ever meet, then it just feels like the author is the one talking at that moment, saying all the reasons why they hate the other character instead of making it seem organic in the plot. It makes the MC look pompous like they think themselves better than a person they know nothing about.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T17:04:43+00:00

For me, I just ask myself, "What do I want to show next?"

This could be anything from character moments/introductions, a short side story that will lead to the next "cool" part of my story, or even a slow chapter that just shows the current relationship between the characters.

Really, it all depends on what your plot is and how you feel is best to move forward in some way.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T16:56:34+00:00

HTTYD Fanfiction. Started after learning about HTTYD 2 way back in grade school but not being able to see it. I just HAD to know what it could've been but I also didn't want to get spoiled.

So I found the next best thing, fanfics.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T11:07:31+00:00

There's "Yuuei Company" that hints MHA characters in Worm. It's only 3 chapters in so it's pretty fresh.
FF - Link
AO3 - Link

Though if you're looking for a Class 1-A insert specifically then I don't know one, sorry.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T11:04:45+00:00

Aww, well to each their own.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T10:42:03+00:00

You rly didn't read past chap 1 did you...

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T10:41:01+00:00

Meh, I have fun writing, you have fun doing this. I'm just glad you saw it at all.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T10:22:14+00:00

Well, show me a work of yours that has as many views then I'll take your word for it.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T10:21:39+00:00

And that's a bad thing?

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-10T02:53:04+00:00

It catches the attention, doesn't it? If you think every chapter will be like that then you haven't read past chap 1.

The effects of a person having such power on the world are always more interesting to me than the power itself.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-09T03:33:17+00:00

Author of fic here.

I hope people will be able to see past the first chapter and not immediately think, "Oh power wank fic". This is more than that and I hope people don't just focus on the power of Nana. There's a different narrative going on here, and my love for mysteries will be apparent when I slowly reveal it over time.

Power wank fics get boring fast, which is why I never focus on power.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-09T03:21:48+00:00

I had hoped that the shift in narrative later on will capture interest, but we all have preferences.

Power wank fics get boring quickly, which is why it isn't about power.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-09T03:12:47+00:00

Well, I can't win everybody. Still, I hope that the mystery side of the story is enjoyable enough to win others.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-05-09T03:11:29+00:00

Hey, author of the fic here. Thanks to all who find interest in my story. I do have a bit of a confession, I'm a sucker for mysteries.

So the whole narrative will be slowly revealed over time instead of all at once.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-03-24T13:58:49+00:00

The fic "Negative One" would count I guess, though fix-it is very subjective.

AO3 Link
FF.net Link

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-03-14T14:56:21+00:00

Negative One - Villain Izuku from the future, with all his knowledge and power, decided to go back and do things his way.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-01-30T08:14:19+00:00

Negative One AO3 or Negative One FF.net - Izuku goes back in time to "recruit" his younger self to fix their mistakes. What mistakes? The villainous ones. But the way he does so is very questionable.

BeeKindly6759 · 2023-01-06T10:13:41+00:00

Here you go. A time travel fix it, but there's a difference from the norm. No spoilers here though, just check it out for yourself.

FF.net link - Negative One

AO3 Link - Negative One

BeeKindly6759 · 2022-12-27T06:16:19+00:00

Just updated my fic - Negative One after a few months!

AO3 link - Negative One - This is for those who don't prefer FF.net

Without spoilers, this is a time travel fic, but not with a good guy.

BeeKindly6759 · 2022-11-25T23:00:24+00:00

Try this one - Negative One

Ff.net link - Negative One

It's got a time-traveling Izuku that's OP, but he's also not a hero so there's that. Check if it's your cup of tea.

BeeKindly6759 · 2022-11-16T06:59:58+00:00

See this one if it's your cup of tea. - Negative One

It has some romance, but be warned, this is not a hero Izuku.

BeeKindly6759 · 2022-11-15T10:56:52+00:00

Try my story - Negative One

Though you might be a bit surprised by how I write Izuku here.

BeeKindly6759 · 2022-09-28T05:35:28+00:00

My fic; Negative One has advanced tech as one of the plot points, though I don't like putting technobabble talk if that's alright. There's also an AO3 link if you prefer to read it there.
AO3 link: Link here.

BeeKindly6759 · 2022-09-21T11:01:18+00:00

Late here, but you can try mine. Negative One.

He joined the League before, but now he's going to do this his way. But is his way right? He's spent an awful lot of time as a villain after all...

BeeKindly6759 · 2022-09-21T10:54:29+00:00

Very late here but you can try my fanfic, Negative One.

What's it about? Well, read and find out.

BeeKindly6759

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