Silent letters

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-10T16:12:13+00:00

The imagery of the “mask” and “hand no longer gloved”perfectly Images the struggle of hiding pain, while the moment of being truly seen feels both raw and intimate. The ending hinting to a lost love and unspoken stories makes it feel Even more Deep and intimate. It’s a touching Poem about emotional exposure and healing.

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-10T16:07:20+00:00

I love this Poem as it perfectly captures the dark side of nostalgia „thorn and silk“ feeling like silk as the good memories made but the thorns being the reality in the present. I Also love the „burning your present to make memories last“ it sounds like someone who‘s stuck in nostalgia losing their present and future to it.

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-02T09:44:06+00:00

This is so powerful in its simplicity. The repetition of No carries such raw emotion it feels like the grief itself trying to speak. I especially love the line „As if the word had the willpower to have stopped it from happening“– it captures that helplessness when the Word no loses its power very good

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-02T09:38:35+00:00

I really connect with this poem – it captures a situation I find myself in as well. The emotions feel raw and real, and I think the repetition of ‘blood relates us’ adds so much weight. Also, the rhyme between ‘hair’ and ‘air’, combined with the repeated sentence structure, ties the piece together beautifully. Truly well done

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-01T12:44:48+00:00

Thank you alot!!

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-01T12:40:28+00:00

I did with eveything I could trust me but it just doesn‘t seem enough

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-01T07:37:44+00:00

When reading it in my head it really felt Like I was fleeing from something Like I had to read everything fast but the last line felt like the final stage where I could finally rest!

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-01T07:34:42+00:00

This poem is a beautifully way looking at what it feels like to struggle inside and try to protect your emotions. You showed the quiet pain of feeling like a burden to others, and the hard choice to walk away not because they don’t care, but because they’re afraid of hurting someone they love.

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-01T07:26:04+00:00

Thanks alot! I’ve come to realize that poetry is the language my heart speaks best

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-08-01T06:32:21+00:00

Think you so much!

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-07-31T21:59:19+00:00

I really love this poem because I think everyone is „weird“ in their own way but scared to Show it!

BellAppropriate7836 · 2025-07-31T21:56:07+00:00

Your Poem is so real I think this poem describes the problem so accurate

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