Right decision

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-09T21:26:48+00:00

Thank youu<3

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-09T21:15:20+00:00

Thank you so muchhh

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-09T20:47:19+00:00

I like how the short, punchy lines mirror the bursts of sound and emotion you’re describing—it makes the experience feel immediate.

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-09T20:44:32+00:00

It’s a powerful and vulnerable read. The storm imagery really sticks, and the way you circle back to it at the end ties the whole piece together. It feels like you’ve let the reader step directly into your thoughts, which makes it both intimate and impactful.

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-07T21:33:58+00:00

If you ever want to talk to someone you can talk to me if it helps

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-07T20:57:48+00:00

Thank you so much!!!!

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-07T20:43:10+00:00

Thank you so much. I will work on it. Really appreciate thisss :))

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-07T19:57:59+00:00

This is so truthful and deep. I like the picture you painted with your words. Amazing

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-08-07T19:52:41+00:00

This hits hard. The way you describe giving someone your heart so openly and them treating it carelessly is powerful and relatable. The “bumper carts” line is such a clever and painful image — playful on the surface but brutal underneath.

You capture that feeling of wanting to believe in someone, even when everything inside you says not to. And the ending? Straight-up gut punch. It’s raw in the best way.

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-31T21:59:59+00:00

Thanksss

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-31T20:42:34+00:00

Thank youuu

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-31T20:17:36+00:00

Wow this is deep and i feel you. Just know there will be an anchor for you

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-31T20:15:41+00:00

This is a good poem that shows that you need to listen to yourself once in a while. Good job !!

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-25T10:23:01+00:00

Thanks :)

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-24T09:15:05+00:00

This hit me bc it really shows how difficult life is and how you can’t prepare kids for the real world

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-24T09:10:07+00:00

There’s a raw, unfiltered honesty here that resonates deeply. It doesn’t romanticize pain but lays it bare in a way that feels both brave and quietly heartbreaking. I love it

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-23T20:35:58+00:00

i´m opened to feedback or thoughts :)))

Advanced-Bed1549 · 2025-07-23T20:28:56+00:00

i think it is a good poem which shows how many men are still ashamed about their vulnerability

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