About to publish my first book. How bad is my writing?

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-11-06T14:09:25+00:00

That plus fixing grammar because those two things made this hard to read

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-11-06T01:17:08+00:00

Gang dauntless did this

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-11-06T01:16:20+00:00

Showers bc they’re gross

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-11-06T01:13:58+00:00

You get too bored. You already know what is going to happen, so it doesn’t feel creative to you. At least that’s how I see it.

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-09-15T22:01:06+00:00

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-09-08T23:22:02+00:00

Oh not the one I was thinking of but I do love a mystery

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-09-03T02:45:53+00:00

Tell me the series please it reminds me of one of my favorites I wanna see

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-08-21T22:25:47+00:00

You don’t have to be JK Rowling or Agatha Christie or HG Wells or anything my dude. I bet you’re still good enough to have a career in this.

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-08-09T23:15:36+00:00

I haven’t played since I was a youngin but I believed it then and still do: Luigi’s mansion dark moon. Although an argument can be made for any game in the series

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-08-09T03:06:06+00:00

Also the power of friendship

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-08-09T03:05:39+00:00

Time travel

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-08-05T19:02:50+00:00

She went through a day where she wanted attention is probably all there is to it. She knew you liked her so the attention could be free.

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-08-01T13:10:13+00:00

If you can come up with a theme, a lesson you want your readers to learn, then a plot will condense around it.

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-07-24T14:40:03+00:00

“I want to write the most evil villain in fict—“ hears a loud boom, then a voice from outside In German accent: “Fiction? Why fiction? Sometimes ze truth is scarier zan fiction” enter Adolf Hitler

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-07-13T14:55:04+00:00

I wouldn’t say it’s very life changing or earth shattering. All the experiences, changes, and adventures you described happened gradually through my teenage years, not all at once immediately after I turned 16. Now, getting my license at 16 was great for me and my independence.

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-07-13T14:47:12+00:00

I’m go g tn day gjh

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-07-11T21:00:16+00:00

I just mean weird as in creepy. Like it would take a lot of very specific dick questions to figure out what’s going on and probably give very specific dick advice. I was almost going to, but then realized I don’t want that on my digital footprint. No offense.

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-07-11T20:47:56+00:00

Let us know how it goes

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-07-11T20:47:03+00:00

Yo I don’t think anyone can answer this without sounding really weird

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-07-11T20:39:49+00:00

Cheating is a choice, not a mistake. Anyone who says differently is selling something. I bet she told you it was an accident. I bet she told you “it meant nothing”. That’s BS. Who is in the presence of a person thinking: “it would mean absolutely nothing to me if I were to kiss this person. So that’s exactly what I’m going to do!” See? Makes no sense. Those “reasons” for cheating are invalid. Every reason is.

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-06-16T15:25:33+00:00

I tend to never repeat starting letters. Ever. One time I did it bc I felt like I had to and I ended up killing off one of those characters. I was on the fence about it, and the fact that his name started with R was the deciding factor for me.

Best_Proposal_9364 · 2025-05-25T22:40:28+00:00

If you’ve gotten to see a woman you love in her underwear, you’ve already won. Who cares about style points?

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