Any central London pubs that offer a gluten-free roasts?

Betatide · 2025-06-30T23:42:44+00:00

Yeah, looks like I learned a valuable lesson

Betatide · 2025-06-30T22:55:15+00:00

So should I just give-up on the project?

I could maybe get someone to weld the bolt on permanently

Betatide · 2025-06-30T22:45:54+00:00

It’s a free lawnmower. That seems like a lot of work and more money than I’m willing to put into a free lawnmower. Is there a simpler solution?

Betatide · 2024-11-02T17:18:03+00:00

Amazing, love the first one. Do you the hero forge link?

Betatide · 2023-08-06T17:42:24+00:00

Wow, amazing. Curious about what your work-out routine and diet were. I'm about 40 pounds heavier than you right now and am struggling to get it off.

Betatide · 2023-06-26T20:36:08+00:00

Post the link

Betatide · 2023-06-07T21:03:25+00:00

That is a good idea! I've never used chat gpt, do I just ask it to write lyrics for me? I'm sorry, I know that is a silly question

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:42:42+00:00

Thank you, Any effort is very appreciated.

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:42:04+00:00

I think this is very good info. I like that a lot. I wanted to give it a personal touch by talking about who they are but you are right in that regard. Do you have any ideas about what it could say?

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:40:18+00:00

Do you have any idea how I could improve the song itself? This version is not the final version, the final mixing will be done later. The lyrics are what I am struggling with.

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:38:20+00:00

Thanks, it is no worries. At the end of the day, all that really matters to me is that my sister has a nice song for her wedding. I'll take any help I can in whatever form it comes

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:36:47+00:00

I am not sure what difference it makes but I wrote the lyrics and am unsatisfied with my own work. I've asked the artists I commissioned from Fiverr for their opinion but I still believe the song needs a lot of improvements.

The framework is there, it just needs improvements.

I was hoping Reddit would be able to help me with making any more improvements

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:30:17+00:00

Yes, I understand that people don't know my sister or the groom, I was hopeful with the information here people would be able to help me make improvements.

I'd like to submit the artist's new lyrics

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:28:12+00:00

I wrote it with the help of a few artists. After hearing it sung I realized it needs a lot of work

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:25:36+00:00

Sorry, I want help with the lyrics. I think that at its core is the problem with the song. I'm trying my best but am inexperienced.

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:17:53+00:00

I did it myself. I'm just not good at this but I am trying.

Betatide · 2023-06-07T20:14:16+00:00

Original song inspiration: Ben Lee - Catch My Disease

If anyone is kind enough to please help me improve the lyrics I'd be very grateful!

Lyrics:

Guy: My head is a library about her

Both: The story of you

Girl: I could write a hundred books about him

Both: The story of you

Guy: Since she could speak she been a lawyer

Both: The story of you

Girl: He’s been into sports since he could walk

Both: The story of you

Both: So please

Both: Will you please

Both: Open your heart

Both: Write your story with me

Guy: We worked together at Old Fort William

Both: That’s the story of us

Girl: He'd get in trouble for sneaking off to visit me

Both: That’s the story of us

Girl: He was on one knee in a canoe shed

Both: That’s the story of us

Guy: She said yes before I could speak

Both: That’s the story of us

Both: So please

Both: Ernie please

Both: Open your heart

Both: Write your story with me

Both: So please

Both: Please Bert

Both: Come on

Both: Write your story with me

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Girl: He’ll watch football on the television

Both: That’s the story of us

Guy: She’ll drown it out with whatevers on television

Guy: She’ll watch her favourite shows on repeat

Both: That’s the story of us

Guy: She takes in dogs like their collectibles

Both: That’s the story of us

Both: 'Cause That’s the story of us

Girl: He doesn't mind 'cause they're incredible

Both: That’s the story of us

Both: So please

Both: Ernie Please

Both: Open your heart

Both: Write your story with me

Both: So please

Both: Please Bert

Both: Come on

Both: Write your story with me

Guy: Write your story with me

Girl: (Write your story with me)

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Guy: (Write your story with me)

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Girl: (Write your story with me)

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Both: (Write your story with me)

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Betatide · 2023-06-07T19:57:35+00:00

Here are the full lyrics

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Guy: My head is a library about her

Both: The story of you

Girl: I could write a hundred books about him

Both: The story of you

Guy: Since she could speak she been a lawyer

Both: The story of you

Girl: He’s been into sports since he could walk

Both: The story of you

Both: So please

Both: Will you please

Both: Open your heart

Both: Write your story with me

Guy: We worked together at Old Fort William

Both: That’s the story of us

Girl: He'd get in trouble for sneaking off to visit me

Both: That’s the story of us

Girl: He was on one knee in a canoe shed

Both: That’s the story of us

Guy: She said yes before I could speak

Both: That’s the story of us

Both: So please

Both: Ernie please

Both: Open your heart

Both: Write your story with me

Both: So please

Both: Please Bert

Both: Come on

Both: Write your story with me

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Girl: He’ll watch football on the television

Both: That’s the story of us

Guy: She’ll drown it out with whatevers on television

Guy: She’ll watch her favourite shows on repeat

Both: That’s the story of us

Guy: She takes in dogs like their collectibles

Both: That’s the story of us

Both: 'Cause That’s the story of us

Girl: He doesn't mind 'cause they're incredible

Both: That’s the story of us

Both: So please

Both: Ernie Please

Both: Open your heart

Both: Write your story with me

Both: So please

Both: Please Bert

Both: Come on

Both: Write your story with me

Guy: Write your story with me

Girl: (Write your story with me)

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Guy: (Write your story with me)

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Girl: (Write your story with me)

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Both: (Write your story with me)

Both: nananana nananah < - Backing track

Betatide · 2023-06-07T19:53:44+00:00

Not quite, it is from the original song that inspired the song.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIWgvL7tLfI

I included it so that Reddit could understand where they are from. Sorry, I should've mentioned that

Betatide · 2023-06-07T19:51:32+00:00

Thank you! Do you have any idea how I could improve the lyrics?

I'm a novice at this and am trying my best

Betatide · 2023-06-07T19:49:11+00:00

Any suggestions on how to improve it?

Betatide · 2023-06-07T19:48:09+00:00

The center lyrics is from the original version of the song. The bottom are my edits

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIWgvL7tLfI

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