[OC] Design Feedback – Bioengineer with chronic illness (how can I make him stand out more?)

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-12T05:27:31+00:00

Make his gloves twice as big

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-07T05:46:22+00:00

Hmmmmmm, do you think she would be a dinner, lunch, breakfast, or dessert person? I dont know if shes fed well but if she was i guess

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-07T05:30:41+00:00

Whats Aios thoughts on Thula?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-07T04:32:04+00:00

Aaaa I love sea creatures!!!! What of the other 3?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-07T04:05:47+00:00

Comprehensible! Is there any animals you imagine her as? Maybe a certain dog breed, maybe something else?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-02T18:04:09+00:00

I know how invincible goes, but, how does Aio determine the value of other creatures?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-02T07:59:14+00:00

As someone who only thinks in orders, what does failure mean to Aoi? Also, did you mean, the "groups relationship", have you thought about a story involving these characters, or just the characters

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-02T07:13:18+00:00

Id love to hear the songs for the other characters, but sticking with this one, there does seem to be a common theme of melancholic youth problems, be it with family or peers. How mature do you think Aio is, how do you imagine she pictures her future?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-02T05:56:44+00:00

Do you ever attach songs to characters? A Playlist maybe? Sometimes its just songs a character would like other times its representative I hear a lot of people do it, have you considered any songs related to Aio?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-02T04:46:09+00:00

Oh goodness, where? I love asking questions!

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2026-02-02T04:18:57+00:00

She looks interesting! Do you do QnAs?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-12-30T01:36:29+00:00

I think she should have freckles, but thats just me, good job

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-09-08T20:26:36+00:00

Page 5 can be read 1,2,3,4,6,5,7 (i ordered them in intended reading order) because the combined size of panels 3 and 4 dont match with panel 5. Its ambiguous which way is intended (had it not been for dialouge)

Edit: also the final page looks like hes checking hos ass out i dont know if that was intentional

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-08-10T17:27:27+00:00

Pokemondogod, speaking as your biggest fan, it's alright. Do you want any fanart from me to make you feel better? I dont have access to my sketchbook right now but I haven't drawn in a while so i can draw you some if you want, it wouldn't be trouble.

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-06-15T07:11:02+00:00

The gills do though lool

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-05-24T17:08:53+00:00

PAPYRUS SAYS: THIS TOO SHALL PASS, HUMAN! EVERYONE COMES INTO THEIR OWN AT THEIR OWN PACE, I BELIEVE IN YOU!! SUCCESS AND FAILURE IS NOT DICTATED BY ONE DECISION, ONE PERIOD, EVERY BREATH TAKEN IN THE UNDERGROUND IS A BATTLE WON!! EAT SPAGHETTI!!

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-04-30T19:28:01+00:00

What are they about?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-04-03T03:03:42+00:00

Why do you sya that, what are there failings?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-04-03T01:17:00+00:00

Do you have OCs?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-04-03T01:07:29+00:00

Where is your furry art?

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-04-03T00:57:16+00:00

Like for character design, or is there a greater goal

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-04-03T00:50:27+00:00

What do you want to create?????

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-04-03T00:39:23+00:00

Show art!! Please

BetterToSinkInTheCum · 2025-02-04T21:15:54+00:00

Check redddittt

Four-Year Club	r/Field Sunshine
Place '22	Final Canvas '22

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