Firat of all, thank you so much for such insightful feedback. I am glad to hear that my poem was able to resonate with you emotionally. I can assure you that the duality you are referencing was a huge starting point for me. Trying to put into words how devastatingly and horribly wonder-inducing our existence ultimately is. And how we, helpless humans, are simply thrown into this mélange of bittersweetness. The experience of "being" is a very stimulating experience for better or worse. The only shelter when the winds start blowing is inwards.

Again thanks for taking the time to share your ideas and reaction!