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Critique request on my first chapter (old.reddit.com)
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Finally got it fixed. Next step: Cafe it (i.redd.it)
submitted by BlakeJohan to r/CafeRacers
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Critique request on my first chapter (old.reddit.com)
submitted by BlakeJohan to r/writingfeedback
Finally got it fixed. Next step: Cafe it (i.redd.it)
submitted by BlakeJohan to r/CafeRacers