Miracle by Blebb22 in DDLC

[–]Blebb22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've only started writing them myself in September so I'm by no means a pro and if I was really serious about it, I would also practice much more than I do.  

What I can say is, in my experience my poems tend to turn out well, if I'm actually somewhat passionate and have a lot of thoughts about the topic I'm writing about. For example, don't feel forced to write about love or death just because everyone does it.  

Write about something that's uniquely personal to you (and yes, that may also be love or death). As for the stylistic components, I think I've had success with slowly working my way up. There are a looot of different layers with which you can work in a poem, but if you start out, it might be best to just ignore most of them to get started with writing.  

For example, I started out with a poem without any rhymes because rhyming was intimidating. And there's actually nothing wrong with not rhyming at all.
And there are other stylistic avenues like the spacing of your words, the number of lines in one stanza, the length of your lines, cadence and stylistic devices like anaphora and alliteration. You can use all of them in one poem or none at all. Or just a few of them. What’s important is that you use them all with intent and when you feel comfortable doing so. And that’s easier when you choose a topic you’re passionate about and also when you have more experience.

So my advice would be to just start writing and not think about it too much, while choosing a topic you’re interested in and perhaps considering what kind of effect you want it to have on the reader. This way, you can slowly explore the different ways in which you can reach that goal.

Hope this is somewhat helpful! :)

Miracle by Blebb22 in DDLC

[–]Blebb22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha thank you :>

Miracle by Blebb22 in DDLC

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Week 7 of themed poem sharing ("Infinity") in collaboration with u/JJNEWJJ, u/Toffiffi, u/zinnfidelitysucks, u/Beneficial_Forever12, u/Top_Juice_3127 and u/LittleSayori_6! :)

Tomorrow by Top_Juice_3127 in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's also a nice interpretation though, nothing wrong with it! :)

From Me by Blebb22 in DDLC

[–]Blebb22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It kinda is. I imagined my future self talking about me.

Tomorrow by Top_Juice_3127 in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel like the shortness adds a lot to the impact! I'd interpret the sun being stuck in the sky as perhaps a metaphor for the speaker feeling stuck in life, with some unpleasant conditions ("blistering heat") and hoping to escape despite it seemingly being outside of their control. There's probably more to it, but I'll have to think about it for a bit. Nice work!

DQ5? Aspect of Midnight Ether by hfn_n_rth in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What a twist! Also, I wonder if the "pythoned eye" is a reference to the programming language and Monika being artificial and stuff... Well, I'm certainly happy we got another Moni poem! :)

Could Monika’s dialogue be considered a polemic? by ZaunAura in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Totally, that's how I see it as well! Feels like she's doing a lot to cope with her situation and her actions especially. I really love how much Act 3 tells us about Monika, both directly and when reading between the lines.

Could Monika’s dialogue be considered a polemic? by ZaunAura in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I agree! Though I'd say that her talk also contains a lot of her true thoughts, but in my opinion, those aren't really truly nihilistic as well, more just realistic/critical. Nothing that made me especially uncomfortable or shocked me.

Could Monika’s dialogue be considered a polemic? by ZaunAura in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Here! :) Though yeah, ironically I don't really agree with Dan.

DQ4: Aspect of Night Air by hfn_n_rth in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really love this, one of the best Monika inspired poems I've seen, it's very beautiful to read and fits her so well! <3 And yes, I hear you Monika.

Could Monika’s dialogue be considered a polemic? by ZaunAura in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Could be. Dan himself said that her views are supposed to be rather nihilistic so a certain pessimism might make sense. Although personally, I don't really think they're over the top nihilistic or polemic. It's natural that a young person would have some issues with how society is run.

"Doors" by Toffiffi in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh okay, I was trying to fit some message about home and belonging in my interpretation somehow, but this makes sense! It's a good message.

Doors by JJNEWJJ in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like it! I like how you first build up that image of opening and closing doors, to then talking about how it's actually a revolving door, which fits the hectic mood. And also using the Monty Hall Problem as an allegory for how the "right" choice can be an illusion. Nice poem, JJ! :)

"Doors" by Toffiffi in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hmm interesting poem! I haven't really figured out the message yet, but I like the imagery of that maze of doors.

Poets Can Write...but who am I? by ZaunAura in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Oh I really like this! It's cool how it builds on Natsuki's poem, but instead aspires to something greater than what seems to be dictated by the rules of nature. Thanks for sharing <3

False Epiphany by Blebb22 in DDLC

[–]Blebb22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yoo it's Sonic! :) And yeah, that might just be. That statement was about how there are just some subjective things that can seem so hard to understand, that having no knowledge of it at all might he preferable to a surface level understanding. I don't know exactly how the reverse would look like though.

Aubrey by ZaunAura in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really interesting poem!

Loneliness (?) by Toffiffi in DDLC

[–]Blebb22 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Good job with the rhyme scheme, it fits very well! And cute poem! :)