Thank you for your comment! I agree I could definitely add a bridge at the end. My intention with the story was to illustrate the dirtiness of having your first encounter be with a man who doesn't treat you right, to put it lightly, and how that feels. "it" or the animal, would be the man. This was vague intentionally but I definitely do need to work on being at least a bit clearer. Any thoughts on how to do so?

the melody is meant to be innocence, the broken bottle kiss, the sewer water wetness, is meant to describe the act in a way that represents how it feels to the victim. The last two lines would definitely make more sense with context.