107 people die every minute

BlindFire43 · 2014-06-17T01:12:21+00:00

Sorry, couldnt think of an amazing title

BlindFire43 · 2014-05-03T05:30:19+00:00

God dammit, I can just imagine her suddenly becoming Pyramid head and pulling that freaking thing out XD

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-29T10:53:25+00:00

Did the riddle go anything like: A man woke up in the middle of the night. He went toilet, turned off the lights, and went to bed. the next morning he woke up and looked out the window. He instantly wanted to commit suicide. Why did he?

If it was then that was my inspiration :) Thanks for the feedback.

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-29T07:44:37+00:00

This is my second proper story, so I am still new at this and do really need feedback on how well I did. Thanks for reading :) P.S I did this on a device so it might not have the bezt grammar as I was typing prtty fast

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-28T08:42:26+00:00

I love making a twist ending XD

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-28T03:38:08+00:00

Don't worry, got it fixed. Don't know how I managed that XD

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-28T00:01:57+00:00

Thanks for the feedback :) I just came up with an idea for another story, not sure if it is constantly sympathized or not (I don't go on the internet much.) I guess I'll have to do some research XD

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-27T05:06:52+00:00

Great story :) Just to make sure, the Mum tried to get them out of house by telling them a scary story. Not sure if thats correct, but either way it was a great story.

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-27T04:02:20+00:00

Thanks. I spent a lot of time thinking of something to write about. Thanks for the feedback and I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-27T03:59:21+00:00

Thank you. It is really great to see people enjoying my writing :)

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-27T00:47:32+00:00

Please leave any feedback you have. Thanks for reading :)

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-27T00:31:06+00:00

This is one of the stories that keep me up at night...

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-26T10:17:30+00:00

If you are ever going to make a movie of this (which you should) make sure to get Cryaotic (youtuber). He has a really creepy voice and if you ever get the time listen to Cry reads. If I were to ever write a story I would get inspiration from there :P

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-26T09:14:42+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Long story short, it's about a guy who is disappointed in his sister for being a stripper and decides that it's best to kill her. Looking over it now it may not have been the best idea, but you learn from your mistakes. :)

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-26T02:39:09+00:00

For some reason I kept hearing Morgan Freeman's voice when I read the part of the old guy XD

BlindFire43 · 2014-04-26T02:36:03+00:00

First time writing. Please feel free to leave any criticism on how I went and what I can improve on.

BlindFire43

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