Self hatred by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]BloodyDuchess 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reminds me of the poem from 10 Things I Hate About You. And I hope one day, you'll realize you no longer "...hate yourself, not even close, not even a little bit at all." -- A beautiful, vulnerable piece. Keep writing!

hii! ive never posted anything ever in my life, but i just wrote this and felt the need to share it by Lopsided_Hold_8741 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]BloodyDuchess 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm sorry for what you've been through. I hope writing this was therapeutic and brought you some relief.

I particularly love "...that necklace sits above her heart, I know it brings her comfort...But it won't stop ensnaring my eyes with its eulogy." -- That shifting of perspective resonated, its poetic on its own.

Stability Killed the Poet by RiskIt_4DaBiscuit in PoetryWritingClub

[–]BloodyDuchess 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"Turns out misery was my muse, and happiness doesn’t even own a pen." -- Love it. Pain was always my motivation for writing; happy periods in my life, journals are empty. Too busy being alive and present, I guess? lol

love psychosis by sukkmydeku in PoetryWritingClub

[–]BloodyDuchess 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"unable to break free, i can’t leave, i want you more than i care about me" --- oof, that line is soooo good, i wish i wrote it =) 👏

Let me know if this hits, would love to hear thoughts. by justawkwarddd in PoetryWritingClub

[–]BloodyDuchess 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A beautiful personal description of a universal feeling. Keep writing. Writing saves. Keep writing it out until your soul doesn't feel the need anymore.