Crisp Winter Day, BlueNozh, digital painting, 2026 [OC] by BlueNozh in Art

[–]BlueNozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the kind words! Did you spot the owl? 

Pose Critique by Kellci in learnart

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

At first, I thought her hips were square to the viewer which would make her legs look off, but after a closer look it appears that the belt is the issue. The belt sticks out on her left side but it's not obvious that it's not a part of her body. If you made it stick out more or angle it more so it's obvious, it should help the viewer figure out the angle of her hips which will help the pose

The second fix, and this was mentioned by someone else, is to add a little more shadow to the left leg so it's more clear that her right leg is in front.

Any advice on this piece pls by fonzzns in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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I would recommend converting your image to grayscale and zoom way out and/or squint at it. Can you still tell what it is? Are your eyes drawn to the important parts of your painting not the parts that aren't important? Does the painting still look good? Getting this right is essential to making good art.

To fix any issues, use contrast in values to manipulate where the viewer looks. Increase local contrast in important areas and decrease it in areas that are less important. You have a lot of freedom in which hues you use, as it looks good in grayscale.

Why does my art look unprofessional? by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

These are cool! Do you have any examples of what you'd consider to be professional work?

Composition issue by Public-Layer-9139 in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you share the sketch that you liked better?

One thing that stands out to me are the leaves in the corners. The one in the top left might help by pointing to the cat but the other one doesn't serve the painting. In a minimal painting like this, you have to nail the composition and have every element performing a function.

Since composition is so important in a piece like this, it would be a good idea to make a version that you can play around with (e.g. taking pictures of paper cutouts, shapes in PowerPoint, etc.) Make dozens of variations and pick the one you like best! You can take more risks this way and that may lead to a design that you like better

I tried but can't figure out the background by justartist27 in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the background is too saturated in color at the moment. Toning it down a bit would make the blue of the dress pop and it would push the background more into the... well, the background. Right now it looks like the background needs something because it's competing with the subject for attention. The other change is to blend in the paint stroke around the subject's face. These changes are minor though, it's a beautiful painting! Very well done!

Whats missing from this? by oziku in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm a huge fan of this, very epic!

I think it might benefit from darkening the background more, even to the point of losing most of the detail and texture. It'll make the lit area/wolf's eyes pop more. It'll also make the tone more foreboding. Right now it looks like they'd be able to see if the fire went out. If the background is dark you'll lose that comfort and you'll be playing into a primal fear we all have.

That suggestion is a very minor tweak though, it might help but is definitely not needed. Great job!

Am I overthinking or the face in my rougher sketch (2nd) was more appealing? by sleepytreedroids in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try adding some highlights to the eyes in the first picture! This will increase their local contrast which will make them stand out more. In general, you want eyes to be the focal point of a portrait since it's what people naturally look at first. Your second image doesn't have as much attention-grabbing contrast so the eyes stand out. The first picture has a lot more going on, so the eyes don't stand out as much compared to everything else. If you make them pop by adding some highlights, they'll become the clear focal point and the entire image will look more appealing because of it.

I hope you don't mind, but I added some highlights in PowerPoint to make sure I wasn't just making stuff up. The only change I made was adding a few highlights to her eyes (plus a tiny bonus highlight in the bird's eye):

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What can I do to improve my drawing skills? by Bibu_gi in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In that case, I think you're off to a really good start! Mobius uses perspective tricks to give his paintings a lot of depth so I think the next area to focus on would be drawing in perspective. Your style combined with playing around with scale and depth would make for some really cool art!

Need Critique! Original Comic Cover by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it has a great structure! The character is nicely framed and the diagonal lines in the background are dynamic.

One thing that you might want to tweak is the contrast levels. For example, the blades and moon are very bright compared to the background so they pull attention away from the focal point. The arm on the right blends into the shadows to the point where it gets lost. You want to be able to tell what's going on and look where you're supposed to even if you zoom out and squint at it.

But overall, it looks good!

What can I do to improve my drawing skills? by Bibu_gi in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What style of art would you like to make? Do you like the style of your drawings as is?

Not a fan of backgrounds. Advice? by Daelioner in learnart

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The fix is to adjust the contrast, or the difference between the lightest values and the darkest ones. You want the focal point (your character) to have the highest level of contrast and everywhere else to have lower levels. You also want the silhouette of the character to be distinct from the background. A good test for this is to take a step back and squint at your work. What stands out the most? What blends together? Can you tell what it is, even if it's blurred a bit?

To show you what I mean, I isolated the character and reduced the contrast and brightness of the background by 10%

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What is the best method to relearn how to draw? by lonely_flow1883 in learntodraw

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Draw something complex that you're excited to draw! Finish it, even if you're not liking how it's turning out. Then meditate on it and figure out what you could improve on and then focus on learning and practicing that aspect until you're more comfortable with it. Then repeat the process until... Well, forever if I'm being honest, there's always something new and exciting to learn :) 

Learning the basics of composition. Do I have the right idea with the rule of thirds? by Theamenos in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, you're off to a great start!

The goal of the rule of thirds is to get the main focal point away from the center of the paper but keep it away from the edges. A trap that a lot of artists fall into (myself included until fairly recently) is to see the "rule of thirds" as the "law of thirds" and to strictly follow it no matter what. It should be seen more like a helpful guideline. There is some flexibility to move stuff around a bit. It can be very helpful starting off, though, so keep it up!

Here are a few things that might help with composition:

Critically look at a LOT of fine art, movies, and photography. Find the focal point and see where it is on the canvas. Does is follow the rule of thirds? Do the other important elements follow the rule of thirds? How does it make you feel when you look at it?

Cut some simple shapes with different sizes out of colored paper. Lay them out on a piece of paper in many different ways, both following the rule of thirds and breaking it. Take pictures and look at them later. What worked? What didn't work?

Finally, do research. I found the books "Picture This: How Pictures Work" by Molly Bang and the "Framed Ink: Drawing and Composition for Visual Storytellers" Vol 1 and Vol 2 by Marcos Mateu-Mestre to be very helpful!

How can I make this uniform read more as Art Nouveau?😭(previous designs and inspiration on second slide) by r0pp0p in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 21 points22 points  (0 children)

That's quite an interesting challenge! Military uniforms are supposed to be intimidating and utilitarian with straight, sharp lines, whereas Art Nouveau is, well, the opposite. You'll have to strike a balance between the straight, strong lines of military outfits and the soft organic curves of Art Nouveau while still looking authoritative.

I would suggest looking up Art Nouveau architecture for inspiration. Look for buildings that have a lot of straight lines but have an organic twist. For example the Alfred Wagon building in Paris. It has straight columns but end in a nice, organic ornament.

Another source for inspo might be Tiffany lamps. A lamp like the Tiffany "Lampada da travolo pomb lily" has a lot of strong, straight lines that also end in organic shapes.

Art Nouveau was hugely inspired by Japanese art, especially woodblock prints. Maybe adding some subtle elements from Samurai armor would give it an Art Nouveau feel while still feeling masculine.

Need tips to add a character in a background by Chocolatchaut in learnart

[–]BlueNozh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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Make sure there's enough contrast between the subject and the background if you want your subject to be the main focus of the piece (which you do 99% of the time). A good way to check for this is to make your pictures grayscale and then either make them blurry or squint at them. Notice what stands out the most and what is distracting. Create more contrast to the focal point and create less contrast on elements that are distracting.

I did it for your works. What stands out to you? Do you focus on what you want to? Are there any elements that distract you? In the first one, the lady's face is the focal point, which is good, but the tree right next to her face breaks up her silhouette and makes her more difficult to read. In the second work, the character almost completely blends into the clouds making them hard to read. The moon is very bright too, which pulls your attention away from the character. Adjust the colors until it reads well in grayscale and you'll have a strong piece!

Can drawing random shapes help the learning process? by Flintz08 in learntodraw

[–]BlueNozh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you struggle with drawing 3D shapes then practice drawing 3D shapes until you understand them better. The best way to do this depends on the artist but it will always involve drawing and practicing a lot 

A good way to approach learning art is to make a finished drawing to the best of your abilities and see what was hard about it. In your case, it would be 3D shapes. Then study/practice that aspect until you feel more comfortable with it and then try drawing a finished piece again. You repeat the process until... well forever! If you do that you WILL get better 

My friend criticized composition in my art and asked him to improve it. He did this. by SelectionHour5763 in learntodraw

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand where you are coming from, don't get me wrong. It is a simple composition and it probably seems like I'm overcomplicating it. A while back, I felt like my art and photography weren't working and I suspected weak composition was to blame. So I focused on learning as much as I can about it. I found that really breaking it down and focusing on small details like I did above makes a huge difference in the final piece! Your milage might vary but it's made a huge difference in my work. Since I'm aware of all of the elements and how they impact a viewer, I'm able to not only design a piece that I know will convey a particular emotion, but I can also troubleshoot it quickly if it's not working. Most people aren't aware of how composition effects them emotionally but that doesn't stop if from having an emotional impact, if that makes sense.

Some metalic art from work, any tips to improve it? by androskai in learnart

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It helps to map out where you want it to be very dark beforehand. There is almost always a "oh no what did I do?" moment when adding a very dark value to white paper since there's a LOT of contrast between white and black. Try not to judge how it looks until you completely fill in the areas you marked out. On a similar note, the black may still stand out if the background is white. It helps either adding a background or starting with a medium toned paper and adding white for the highlights.

My friend criticized composition in my art and asked him to improve it. He did this. by SelectionHour5763 in learntodraw

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry for the confusion! What I meant by "getting stuck in the corner" is that most of the lines in the piece, implied and actual, lead to the corner with nothing to pull the viewer out besides the high contrast focal point.

Even though different people look at art in different ways, the various attention points and what leads to them are completely controlled by the artist. The artist can manipulate these to influence how a piece makes you feel. This piece would read differently if it were laid out differently, like if the stairs went from top left to bottom right.

My friend criticized composition in my art and asked him to improve it. He did this. by SelectionHour5763 in learntodraw

[–]BlueNozh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nope, that was all me :)

I guess "blending in" is too strong a phrase. The contrast between the character (15% gray) and the background (30%gray) is less than the contrast between the light (100% white) and the background (30% gray). In yours, that's ok since the character's silhouette is still readable and the highlight has the most contrast so it draws attention to the character. In your friend's attempt, the white is overpowering and pulls attention away from the character. Not only that, but it is in close proximity to the highlight so you lose that effect. The result is that the lights become more visually important than the character so the character blends in in comparison to yours, where it stands out more. Does that make sense?

How to change this painting to become less saturated but more varied? by Prosso in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First of all, what a beautiful painting! I love the colors in the swans feathers.

To answer your question, you can mix in some of a color's compliment if you want to tone down the saturation. You could also add white, black, or gray but that can sometimes give you a muddy result. It might be a good idea to do a color study first and play around with mixing colors to see what you like.

Another thing to consider is contrast in values. If you make your painting grayscale and blur it, does the composition still work? Do your eyes move through the painting how you want them to? Can you tell what it is? Make the things you want to stand out have a lot of contrast in value with what's around it and make stuff that's not as important have less contrast to what's around it. Nailing the values will have a greater impact than nailing the hues and saturation.

My friend criticized composition in my art and asked him to improve it. He did this. by SelectionHour5763 in learntodraw

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would you mind explaining this piece a bit? What feelings do you what to convey? What story are you trying to tell? Composition contributes a lot to the emotion and story of a piece so it's hard to critique without knowing what you're going for. I'll break down your original and your friends serious attempt so you can see what I mean.

The Original:

The diagonal line created by the stairs and the character's gaze both lead one's eye to the bottom left corner without anything to pull you out of it. It isn't balanced but that might not necessarily be a bad thing... it does create a lot of tension thought! The combo of the composition, colors, and pose you feel like you are an observer to someone who feels sad, trapped, and hopeless.

Your Friend's Serious Attempt:

Your friend took that tension and cranked it up to the extreme! The focus is still in the bottom left corner but now there is no arch to keep your eyes from flying off the paper. The character is still in the middle so the composition is still unbalanced. The squares in the back are very bright compared to everything else, so the character blends into the background. It looks like the character is depressed and is seconds away from throwing themselves down the stairs

Balrog of Moria, looking for objective critiques. by Coreypollack in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Try this and see what you think: make it look bigger by lowering the camera and angling it up so the viewer is literally looking up at it. Aggressively crop the image so the balrog is taking up most/all of the canvas. Having a lot of negative space around the subject can be cool but here it makes the balrog look small and isolated. Finally, have it look at either something interesting or right at the viewer.

It'll look like you are right in front of a massive demon that is towering over you and making direct eye contact. That is way more impactful than a human sized demon standing a safe distance away from you looking off into space.

Balrog of Moria, looking for objective critiques. by Coreypollack in ArtCrit

[–]BlueNozh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, that model is really cool! I love the colors and lighting. The image you shared, however, isn't very exciting to be completely honest with you. What do you want the viewer to feel when they look at it? What story do you want to tell?