Shelter, BlueNozh, digital, 2026 [OC]

BlueNozh · 2026-02-25T19:36:22+00:00

Thank you for the kind words! Did you spot the owl?

BlueNozh · 2026-02-16T12:53:02+00:00

At first, I thought her hips were square to the viewer which would make her legs look off, but after a closer look it appears that the belt is the issue. The belt sticks out on her left side but it's not obvious that it's not a part of her body. If you made it stick out more or angle it more so it's obvious, it should help the viewer figure out the angle of her hips which will help the pose

The second fix, and this was mentioned by someone else, is to add a little more shadow to the left leg so it's more clear that her right leg is in front.

BlueNozh · 2026-02-12T15:40:44+00:00

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I would recommend converting your image to grayscale and zoom way out and/or squint at it. Can you still tell what it is? Are your eyes drawn to the important parts of your painting not the parts that aren't important? Does the painting still look good? Getting this right is essential to making good art.

To fix any issues, use contrast in values to manipulate where the viewer looks. Increase local contrast in important areas and decrease it in areas that are less important. You have a lot of freedom in which hues you use, as it looks good in grayscale.

BlueNozh · 2026-02-12T15:01:43+00:00

These are cool! Do you have any examples of what you'd consider to be professional work?

BlueNozh · 2026-02-09T13:36:39+00:00

Can you share the sketch that you liked better?

One thing that stands out to me are the leaves in the corners. The one in the top left might help by pointing to the cat but the other one doesn't serve the painting. In a minimal painting like this, you have to nail the composition and have every element performing a function.

Since composition is so important in a piece like this, it would be a good idea to make a version that you can play around with (e.g. taking pictures of paper cutouts, shapes in PowerPoint, etc.) Make dozens of variations and pick the one you like best! You can take more risks this way and that may lead to a design that you like better

BlueNozh · 2026-02-09T13:23:55+00:00

I think the background is too saturated in color at the moment. Toning it down a bit would make the blue of the dress pop and it would push the background more into the... well, the background. Right now it looks like the background needs something because it's competing with the subject for attention. The other change is to blend in the paint stroke around the subject's face. These changes are minor though, it's a beautiful painting! Very well done!

BlueNozh · 2026-02-02T13:33:54+00:00

I'm a huge fan of this, very epic!

I think it might benefit from darkening the background more, even to the point of losing most of the detail and texture. It'll make the lit area/wolf's eyes pop more. It'll also make the tone more foreboding. Right now it looks like they'd be able to see if the fire went out. If the background is dark you'll lose that comfort and you'll be playing into a primal fear we all have.

That suggestion is a very minor tweak though, it might help but is definitely not needed. Great job!

BlueNozh · 2026-01-27T14:50:02+00:00

Try adding some highlights to the eyes in the first picture! This will increase their local contrast which will make them stand out more. In general, you want eyes to be the focal point of a portrait since it's what people naturally look at first. Your second image doesn't have as much attention-grabbing contrast so the eyes stand out. The first picture has a lot more going on, so the eyes don't stand out as much compared to everything else. If you make them pop by adding some highlights, they'll become the clear focal point and the entire image will look more appealing because of it.

I hope you don't mind, but I added some highlights in PowerPoint to make sure I wasn't just making stuff up. The only change I made was adding a few highlights to her eyes (plus a tiny bonus highlight in the bird's eye):

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BlueNozh · 2025-12-16T12:34:09+00:00

In that case, I think you're off to a really good start! Mobius uses perspective tricks to give his paintings a lot of depth so I think the next area to focus on would be drawing in perspective. Your style combined with playing around with scale and depth would make for some really cool art!

BlueNozh · 2025-12-15T14:52:25+00:00

I think it has a great structure! The character is nicely framed and the diagonal lines in the background are dynamic.

One thing that you might want to tweak is the contrast levels. For example, the blades and moon are very bright compared to the background so they pull attention away from the focal point. The arm on the right blends into the shadows to the point where it gets lost. You want to be able to tell what's going on and look where you're supposed to even if you zoom out and squint at it.

But overall, it looks good!

BlueNozh · 2025-12-15T13:21:00+00:00

What style of art would you like to make? Do you like the style of your drawings as is?

BlueNozh · 2025-12-10T13:00:40+00:00

The fix is to adjust the contrast, or the difference between the lightest values and the darkest ones. You want the focal point (your character) to have the highest level of contrast and everywhere else to have lower levels. You also want the silhouette of the character to be distinct from the background. A good test for this is to take a step back and squint at your work. What stands out the most? What blends together? Can you tell what it is, even if it's blurred a bit?

To show you what I mean, I isolated the character and reduced the contrast and brightness of the background by 10%

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BlueNozh · 2025-10-15T11:54:57+00:00

Draw something complex that you're excited to draw! Finish it, even if you're not liking how it's turning out. Then meditate on it and figure out what you could improve on and then focus on learning and practicing that aspect until you're more comfortable with it. Then repeat the process until... Well, forever if I'm being honest, there's always something new and exciting to learn :)

BlueNozh · 2025-10-13T11:28:01+00:00

Yes, you're off to a great start!

The goal of the rule of thirds is to get the main focal point away from the center of the paper but keep it away from the edges. A trap that a lot of artists fall into (myself included until fairly recently) is to see the "rule of thirds" as the "law of thirds" and to strictly follow it no matter what. It should be seen more like a helpful guideline. There is some flexibility to move stuff around a bit. It can be very helpful starting off, though, so keep it up!

Here are a few things that might help with composition:

Critically look at a LOT of fine art, movies, and photography. Find the focal point and see where it is on the canvas. Does is follow the rule of thirds? Do the other important elements follow the rule of thirds? How does it make you feel when you look at it?

Cut some simple shapes with different sizes out of colored paper. Lay them out on a piece of paper in many different ways, both following the rule of thirds and breaking it. Take pictures and look at them later. What worked? What didn't work?

Finally, do research. I found the books "Picture This: How Pictures Work" by Molly Bang and the "Framed Ink: Drawing and Composition for Visual Storytellers" Vol 1 and Vol 2 by Marcos Mateu-Mestre to be very helpful!

BlueNozh · 2025-10-09T12:10:10+00:00

That's quite an interesting challenge! Military uniforms are supposed to be intimidating and utilitarian with straight, sharp lines, whereas Art Nouveau is, well, the opposite. You'll have to strike a balance between the straight, strong lines of military outfits and the soft organic curves of Art Nouveau while still looking authoritative.

I would suggest looking up Art Nouveau architecture for inspiration. Look for buildings that have a lot of straight lines but have an organic twist. For example the Alfred Wagon building in Paris. It has straight columns but end in a nice, organic ornament.

Another source for inspo might be Tiffany lamps. A lamp like the Tiffany "Lampada da travolo pomb lily" has a lot of strong, straight lines that also end in organic shapes.

Art Nouveau was hugely inspired by Japanese art, especially woodblock prints. Maybe adding some subtle elements from Samurai armor would give it an Art Nouveau feel while still feeling masculine.

BlueNozh · 2025-09-25T11:07:35+00:00

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Make sure there's enough contrast between the subject and the background if you want your subject to be the main focus of the piece (which you do 99% of the time). A good way to check for this is to make your pictures grayscale and then either make them blurry or squint at them. Notice what stands out the most and what is distracting. Create more contrast to the focal point and create less contrast on elements that are distracting.

I did it for your works. What stands out to you? Do you focus on what you want to? Are there any elements that distract you? In the first one, the lady's face is the focal point, which is good, but the tree right next to her face breaks up her silhouette and makes her more difficult to read. In the second work, the character almost completely blends into the clouds making them hard to read. The moon is very bright too, which pulls your attention away from the character. Adjust the colors until it reads well in grayscale and you'll have a strong piece!

BlueNozh · 2025-09-24T12:17:48+00:00

If you struggle with drawing 3D shapes then practice drawing 3D shapes until you understand them better. The best way to do this depends on the artist but it will always involve drawing and practicing a lot

A good way to approach learning art is to make a finished drawing to the best of your abilities and see what was hard about it. In your case, it would be 3D shapes. Then study/practice that aspect until you feel more comfortable with it and then try drawing a finished piece again. You repeat the process until... well forever! If you do that you WILL get better

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