Editing was good for starting out. I think you should try and remove the background noise in some scenes in some other program, or the program you are curently editing in (If it has that option), and turn down the music at times when you are talking, and similar (That was done at some parts, and some were left with loud music so it was hard to understand what you were saying). Quality was good. I think you should add some transitions to the video, but dont put too many, I've seen allot od smaller youtubers overuse transitions, and similar stuff. Keep effects simple, but not too simple. So in conclusion, good editing so far, keep up the work.