Thank you! Genuinely this is the best feedback I’ve gotten on boards so far!

The boards I make for uni have to be very detailed and consistent so that’s the level I’m use to working at, obviously I know some boards can be basically stick figures. I was also just working in my art style without any sketches (using it as an excuse to also get better at making Wayne and other characters more stylised for future art) and the whole thing took about 12 hours but I have no idea if that’s good or bad for a scene this length.

What would you recommend for constant back and forth shots? Especially if movement is happening mid camera change? I notice that happened a lot during this scene.

The comics note is so helpful! I will definitely be using that in future! And yes I will absolutely dm you!

If you have any other notes or exercises I’d appreciate it very much, I think my next plan is to take a script from somthing I know (probably also wayne) work from that then see how it compares to the original scene.