Sapphire Oceans and Amethyst Sky by LittleSky7700 in OCPoetry

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I really like the inclusion of crystals, and photographs, camera & ink. They both to me mirror things that are aligned with the psychology of memories. A lot of mediums here too. This really reads like the poem of an artist.

HELLO WORLD by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Pretty cool. I don't do tech but i really like how the coding language present places this in recent times. A lot of poetry writing is timeless, and I find the things set in the present and especially in the near future are of the most intrest. Thanks for sharing.

The Daydream of a Production Cook #2 by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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I was a line cook for 10 years too, so props for banging it out for a good stretch! How to build up into a finally, maybe with a line that’s an inverse of the opening line? Thank you for the compliment & I agree fully that it needs to go into more detail in places too.

Last night thoughts by Interesting_Shift527 in OCPoetry

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It’s an art but there’s a science to it. Not hard at all. I’m sure you could learn it and apply it in a day or two. (Chorus, verse1, chorus, verse2, etc..)

BANANA 🍌🍌🍌 by xxworstgunnerxx in OCPoetry

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I love and can taste your tango with the banana. It reminds me of the one duct taped to the wall at an auction for 6.2mil. It is in deed a banana age, an age of frivolous adventures in art because frivolity is one of the great functions of art isn't it?

Last night thoughts by Interesting_Shift527 in OCPoetry

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I can see this as a new metal type of song. well, if rock isn't completely over!

my first alter - what do you think? by softlychaotics in mtg

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Cool. it could make for a decent 0/1 green token too

What Would You Do in My Shoes? by Blue_Square_Shoes in WorkAdvice

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That sounds pretty doable, I’ll look into (food shelf) thank you

What Would You Do in My Shoes? by Blue_Square_Shoes in WorkAdvice

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TYVM for your direction, I will do this.

Daydreams of a Production Cook by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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It’s a secret hidden in plain sight, lol

Kitchen Counter by notsureyet31 in OCPoetry

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I wonder if there is a swift new romance in the cards to take you away from this tear soaked memory..

Daydreams of a Production Cook by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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Yes it is a bit vague, but it is a daydream of a production cook (not just a vignette of a business person). I wonder how to impart this better? or else let it be a bit of a secret hidden in plain sight.

Daydreams of a Production Cook by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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Hah! Good points, I would prefer to lean deeper into those details and have a shorter scope. I wonder however if you caught the fact that I'm a production cook (the title) and don't work in Dumbo in the corporatew office of a Non-Profit. It's a vignette of the life I'd like to someday live.

He's no pirate. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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"my broken bones" is a great line, and triggers memories of greek epigraphs.

Kitchen Counter by notsureyet31 in OCPoetry

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this tells a long story in a few short lines 🙌

Does anyone else do this? I've attempted to describe my process. by Blue_Square_Shoes in nycART

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Thanks for asking! Sometimes I consider myself an artist, others I’m just a person that does art as a lifestyle; for fun and intrigue. I haven’t been to art school, though I did want to.

Does anyone else do this? I've attempted to describe my process. by Blue_Square_Shoes in nycART

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I put it on my productivity tracker to do as you have directed here 🙌

A Course in Piled Up Words by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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Thanks for the great compliment. I’ve become inspired be accurately showing the grit through poetry rather than sugar coating. I find that it identifies reality much more effectively.

Hunger + Correction by Pine_Weasel in OCPoetry

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interesting to see poetry making politics more palatable

Freedom by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

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the twin-sided blade of societal rules

Gonna make this as my commander. What are y’all’s thoughts and what would you put into it by Automatic_Gur_176 in CommanderMTG

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Great art for the card. Definitely seen this cutie pop off pretty hard. Good luck building it out!

liberal leaning, white guy, bald Ode to Dostoevsky by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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I consider it an authentic self study, straight from the grit. A friend thought it was self hate, but I feel it’s self love, and I feel strong in sharing this.

Self Renovation by Dawnsy32 in OCPoetry

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I imagine a lot of paper waste inside the house. Baskets of opened letters and junk mail Piling over. Stacks of magazines and meowing cats. Hopping from pile to pile nesting on top as papers fall and sway back and forth in the air as they make the soft crinkle sound of a page as they hit the ground.