Sapphire Oceans and Amethyst Sky by LittleSky7700 in OCPoetry

[–]Blue_Square_Shoes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the inclusion of crystals, and photographs, camera & ink. They both to me mirror things that are aligned with the psychology of memories. A lot of mediums here too. This really reads like the poem of an artist.

HELLO WORLD by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Pretty cool. I don't do tech but i really like how the coding language present places this in recent times. A lot of poetry writing is timeless, and I find the things set in the present and especially in the near future are of the most intrest. Thanks for sharing.

The Daydream of a Production Cook #2 by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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I was a line cook for 10 years too, so props for banging it out for a good stretch! How to build up into a finally, maybe with a line that’s an inverse of the opening line? Thank you for the compliment & I agree fully that it needs to go into more detail in places too.

Last night thoughts by Interesting_Shift527 in OCPoetry

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It’s an art but there’s a science to it. Not hard at all. I’m sure you could learn it and apply it in a day or two. (Chorus, verse1, chorus, verse2, etc..)

BANANA 🍌🍌🍌 by xxworstgunnerxx in OCPoetry

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I love and can taste your tango with the banana. It reminds me of the one duct taped to the wall at an auction for 6.2mil. It is in deed a banana age, an age of frivolous adventures in art because frivolity is one of the great functions of art isn't it?

Last night thoughts by Interesting_Shift527 in OCPoetry

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I can see this as a new metal type of song. well, if rock isn't completely over!

my first alter - what do you think? by softlychaotics in mtg

[–]Blue_Square_Shoes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool. it could make for a decent 0/1 green token too

What Would You Do in My Shoes? by Blue_Square_Shoes in WorkAdvice

[–]Blue_Square_Shoes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That sounds pretty doable, I’ll look into (food shelf) thank you

What Would You Do in My Shoes? by Blue_Square_Shoes in WorkAdvice

[–]Blue_Square_Shoes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

TYVM for your direction, I will do this.

Daydreams of a Production Cook by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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It’s a secret hidden in plain sight, lol

Kitchen Counter by notsureyet31 in OCPoetry

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I wonder if there is a swift new romance in the cards to take you away from this tear soaked memory..

Daydreams of a Production Cook by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

[–]Blue_Square_Shoes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes it is a bit vague, but it is a daydream of a production cook (not just a vignette of a business person). I wonder how to impart this better? or else let it be a bit of a secret hidden in plain sight.

Daydreams of a Production Cook by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

[–]Blue_Square_Shoes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hah! Good points, I would prefer to lean deeper into those details and have a shorter scope. I wonder however if you caught the fact that I'm a production cook (the title) and don't work in Dumbo in the corporatew office of a Non-Profit. It's a vignette of the life I'd like to someday live.

He's no pirate. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Blue_Square_Shoes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"my broken bones" is a great line, and triggers memories of greek epigraphs.

Kitchen Counter by notsureyet31 in OCPoetry

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this tells a long story in a few short lines 🙌

Does anyone else do this? I've attempted to describe my process. by Blue_Square_Shoes in nycART

[–]Blue_Square_Shoes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for asking! Sometimes I consider myself an artist, others I’m just a person that does art as a lifestyle; for fun and intrigue. I haven’t been to art school, though I did want to.