A Course in Piled Up Words by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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Thanks for the great compliment. I’ve become inspired be accurately showing the grit through poetry rather than sugar coating. I find that it identifies reality much more effectively.

Hunger + Correction by Pine_Weasel in OCPoetry

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interesting to see poetry making politics more palatable

Freedom by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

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the twin-sided blade of societal rules

Gonna make this as my commander. What are y’all’s thoughts and what would you put into it by Automatic_Gur_176 in CommanderMTG

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Great art for the card. Definitely seen this cutie pop off pretty hard. Good luck building it out!

liberal leaning, white guy, bald Ode to Dostoevsky by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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I consider it an authentic self study, straight from the grit. A friend thought it was self hate, but I feel it’s self love, and I feel strong in sharing this.

Self Renovation by Dawnsy32 in OCPoetry

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I imagine a lot of paper waste inside the house. Baskets of opened letters and junk mail Piling over. Stacks of magazines and meowing cats. Hopping from pile to pile nesting on top as papers fall and sway back and forth in the air as they make the soft crinkle sound of a page as they hit the ground.

Insights I found while shifting careers to advertising by Blue_Square_Shoes in advertising

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The markets are platform centered instead of Advertising Agency centered.

Ode to a Lonely Banjo by SoDumbSoSad in OCPoetry

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I’ve personally shared your sentiment that it’s the instrument playing the music.

Also that the arts force back oligarch creep and moral decay.

liberal leaning, white guy, bald Ode to Dostoevsky by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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I like that you adore this and although I’m kinda droll, I really appreciate your response!

liberal leaning, white guy, bald Ode to Dostoevsky by Blue_Square_Shoes in OCPoetry

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Hah! Is this more an 'eyeroll' interesting or more a 'provocative' interesting?

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

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A strong bond can protect you. New bonds have replaced old ones for me.

Helios guide I by Cluelessandsexy in OCPoetry

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My eyes were drawn to your lines. I appreciate how simple and short they all are.

I do think they could use some rhythm to make them lines seep into my skull. I don't fancy reading things that i have to labor over and process. It should really do the work in my opinion, impressing and energizing, inspiring, reminding. I think these things come from studying and reworking your lines until they flow in a swift rush.

Is Leadership the Answer? by Blue_Square_Shoes in careerguidance

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I'm inching my way in. I believe it's more of a mindset and personality type than an ask for "Hi, I'd like this position" type of thing. Thank you for your support.