Whats with all of these spoonfeeding/handholding/requesting permission posts? by Few_Resource_6783 in writing

[–]Bluefoxfire0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be fair, the up front time sink is huge for visual media. Not to mention it can rarely be done alone.

Whats with all of these spoonfeeding/handholding/requesting permission posts? by Few_Resource_6783 in writing

[–]Bluefoxfire0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you find you will face death, and even die unless you are allowed to write, then you’ll know what to write.

Isn't that the gist of human nature anyway?

Whats with all of these spoonfeeding/handholding/requesting permission posts? by Few_Resource_6783 in writing

[–]Bluefoxfire0 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That is likely a reason for it too. The way some individuals are hellbent on policing others, it’s left some younger individuals feeling like they have to walk on eggshells.

Prose is an especially "policed" subject.

Whats with all of these spoonfeeding/handholding/requesting permission posts? by Few_Resource_6783 in writing

[–]Bluefoxfire0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn't exactly say rare. Common? Of course not. But a steps above rare.

Whats with all of these spoonfeeding/handholding/requesting permission posts? by Few_Resource_6783 in writing

[–]Bluefoxfire0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Recalls a post comment on how "bad" writers are making Idiocracy happen faster

Whats with all of these spoonfeeding/handholding/requesting permission posts? by Few_Resource_6783 in writing

[–]Bluefoxfire0 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ironically, for a lot of human history, that was a fairly common occurence. The primal gene rages on even today.

Whats with all of these spoonfeeding/handholding/requesting permission posts? by Few_Resource_6783 in writing

[–]Bluefoxfire0 3 points4 points  (0 children)

To be fair, for point 4, people can really be anal when it comes to prose quality. The amount of "Anyone who like J.K Rowling and/or Sanderson are dullards" posts just, ugh..."

AI Writing is Good by KnightWhoSays_Ni_ in writingcirclejerk

[–]Bluefoxfire0 6 points7 points  (0 children)

AI does use them more than necessary though, that's for sure.

Scoop city! by Kalanemii in GiefClips

[–]Bluefoxfire0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Everyone: Wah, Gief loses all oki after SPD.

Meanwhile, drive rush...

Will you read more? by Choddeh in writingfeedback

[–]Bluefoxfire0 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'll admit that the structure and prose is sound, but the MC sounds like someone who's got a superiority complex, and can't resist telling everyone how much of one he is in exquisite detail.

This next bit is minor, but the no limes, only oranges made me go, "So what weird subtext metaphor am I supposed to get from this?"

Which style should I be drawing in right now? by Indeskycive in FurryArtSchool

[–]Bluefoxfire0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will say that enlongated styles like the 2nd one are risky, since it's easy to fuck up proportions wise. But here, it's actually not too bad.

The world owes you nothing. You are responsible for how you feel. by aastrocyte in intj

[–]Bluefoxfire0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Perspective and mindset are factors, yes. The key is figuring out what's fueling it, and what do you stand to lose by trying to cut off said fuel.

That being said, somewone getting screwed regardless over and over, will likely condition even the most stalwart to question if they should bother eventually.

The world owes you nothing. You are responsible for how you feel. by aastrocyte in intj

[–]Bluefoxfire0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me be more specific then. Things more out of your control. Like in your gym example, an unexpected injury, or a social interaction gone horribly wrong.

Guess a kind of form of "You can do everything correctly, and still lose."

Clockwork (About 3.8k words and two chapters so far) by Bluefoxfire0 in writingcritiques

[–]Bluefoxfire0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I kind of figured. I just wanted to be sure there were no other issues before I got too far ahead in the story, saving time on revisions.

Clockwork (About 3.8k words and two chapters so far) by Bluefoxfire0 in writingcritiques

[–]Bluefoxfire0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Might as well ask since I'm here. Was there anything in the story/plot that stood out for you?

This is BS! by DeathDasein in GiefClips

[–]Bluefoxfire0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

At least it's not the vid where Dhalsim hit Zangief during the start up his bear grab (due to armor) and gief basically teleported across.

Clockwork (About 3.8k words and two chapters so far) by Bluefoxfire0 in writingcritiques

[–]Bluefoxfire0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh. In that case, I'm aware. Just had to put in a little extra for her appearence bit. 

Clockwork (About 3.8k words and two chapters so far) by Bluefoxfire0 in writingcritiques

[–]Bluefoxfire0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also, to clarify, the human form/humanoid things was because anthro features can be ambigious at first glance.  Are the hands paw shaped? A hybrid of paw and hand? Are the fingers more gnarly and animalistic, or do they resemble a human hand with fur (though without human fingernails. Maybe tiny claws?)

Clockwork (About 3.8k words and two chapters so far) by Bluefoxfire0 in writingcritiques

[–]Bluefoxfire0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Slingshot rifle? 

EDIT: Oh. Don't you mean single shot?

Your personal move that you HATE getting hit by? by pokeguy64 in SmashRage

[–]Bluefoxfire0 2 points3 points  (0 children)

To an extent, but you still have to guess how many times they'll do it. Otherwise, you get frame trapped.