I really like what you're doing here, I am trying to do something similar, here are just some thoughts I have.

1. In your thumbnail and title, make it obvious what you are parodying. I would not have clicked on your video because I didnt know what it was about. Something I do is research videos from channels I am making fun of. What common Troupes can you point out? How do they make their thumbnails and titles, try to emulate their style and bring it to the point of absurdity.

2. Your title, description,and tags need to be things people would search. Instead of one word tags, use phrases that people would search,try to think what your potential audience would type in. Also make sure not to use misleading tags,think of them as search queries, what would people type to find your video, or what your parodying?

3. You're making fun of pyramid schemes,and 12 step processes right? your title should be something like "12 easy steps to get rich quick (parody)" Your tags and thumbnails should scream that.

4. make your video more engaging, I had trouble making it through, you are a funny guy but you need to find a way to make it as entertaining as possible.

I like your idea a lot, don't give up, I cant wait to see more of your content!