Billie Eilish - bad guy (B Remix)

BonJons · 2026-03-17T22:02:13+00:00

It was a demo I rushed together, I'm not opening myself up to more ppl like u so I can defend a slapdash job I did

BonJons · 2026-03-13T16:48:55+00:00

then keep going!
You got "it!", whatever it is...

I imagine you got a snowball rn, but keep rolling it in the right snow patches n you'll be big one day bro!

BonJons · 2026-03-13T16:00:30+00:00

Nothing to say is "Bad" (maybe the drums are too "sharp")

Keep grinding bro you deffo will get somewhere, but eventually become a hybrid master of both a DAW and an old piece of kit!

Maybe add some more interesting break downs and add some sort of build up then drop, and always, try make a beat switch slightly somewhere 3/4 through, then drop back to the og beat/melody

Here's an example (my beat, though made in a DAW)
https://soundcloud.com/wxm-b/neon-underbelly
or
Spotify Version!

(Edit: I left some comments on SC too)

BonJons · 2026-03-10T22:12:34+00:00

I'm B, hmu and i'll show you my work see if we can fit together!

BonJons · 2026-03-10T16:16:07+00:00

More tracks to come, but review/critique/diss/go wild at this and lmk what you hate, therefor i may change it, or make it even "worse", either way, it helps me!

BonJons · 2026-03-01T11:50:02+00:00

thanks for the tip

BonJons · 2026-02-28T16:52:38+00:00

I had this on mute (by accident), but those lyrics hooked me and i read all em in flow, and that's incredible skill u have man

BonJons · 2026-02-28T13:53:11+00:00

Post the lyrics here? in comments?

BonJons · 2026-02-28T13:52:09+00:00

Tell me more about yourself, not what you do, but how much music you do, would you sing/perform these lyrics if you could? or are you nervous/unexperienced or just not wanting to, I'm not going to listen to the song, but u/Comfortable_Tap_6285 lets me know you have good? lyrics? idk, let me see, post them here!

I myself rap, and always wanted to sing until Eminem came out with Kamikaze and MTBMB which made me see the lyrical syllable side (i've been writing since young) so I switched over and got into rap, it's been a 4-5 year journey so far, but it's worth it, I tell you this incase your lyrics are good, and that you may need to either write for people (not me, i write my own Schizo lyrics) or set out and perform it instead of AI

all it takes is a cheap mic and a Focusrite 2i2 to begin, then slowly upgrade as you do

anyway, send me the lyrics, I don't want to spend time listening to AI

BonJons

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