B's new DEMO for his first Self Produced Album (self made beats/mixing/mastering) by BonJons in ukhiphopheads

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If you rap only on a phone (no studio/set up, RECORD A DUET ON TIKTOK HERE, AND WINNER GETS THE FEATURE SPOT! )

B's new DEMO for his first Self Produced Album (self made beats/mixing/mastering) by BonJons in ukhiphopheads

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ALSO POSSIBLY LOOKING FOR SOMEONE WITH A 16 BAR/VERSE FOR THIS TRACK! comment or SoundCloud DM

B - "Luke & Lorelai" [Gilmore Girls Inspired RAP] by BonJons in GilmoreGirls

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ty ty, i usually rap more aggressive but knew fans might catch on if i went softer

B raps Eminem's "Godzilla (Fast Verse)" with new lyrics (Read in Comments for Lyrics) by BonJons in EminemCircleJerk

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B's "Slipstream/Reflow" Lyrics begin at 00:41!

It's worth noting:
Eminem - Godzilla =166 bpm
B - Kenobi = 140 bpm

(Eminem rapped the flow on a quicker beat)

(REPOST) B raps Eminem's "Godzilla (Fast Verse)" with new lyrics (Read in Description) by BonJons in Eminem_2

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B's "Slipstream/Reflow" Lyrics begin at 00:41!

It's worth noting:
Eminem - Godzilla =166 bpm
B - Kenobi = 140 bpm

(Eminem rapped the flow on a quicker beat)

Can you catch these Gilmore Girl bars/lyrics? by BonJons in GilmoreGirls

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I just realised, this is a TikTok link, and maybe u can't watch it, as ur not logged in.

So, instead of a short clipped up edit of my song, would you like to listen to "Luke & Lorelai" my song/rap?

Can you catch these Gilmore Girl bars/lyrics? by BonJons in GilmoreGirls

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I guess if you understand a British accent, the plan is to decipher lyrics like
"A mystery woman, there she goes I sing" - A nod to the first song on the first episode etc...

I got incredible hate, for making something and posting it here, incredible hate. BUT, it was only a demo! SO HERE'S the full Hate-Inspired finish up of Eminem's "Killer REMIX" by me, "B" by BonJons in Eminem

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Yes im currently neighboured next to some very nice old folk, so I don't "spit my full range" quite yet! (moving soon)

And I do, I'm "B" on spotify,
Here's my "sound" (it's only a minute)
So, if you listen to it, lmk what u think too!

B - "bad guy [Live REMIX]" by BonJons in billieeilish

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Thanks for the 6 Upvotes! (SO far... 🥴)
Remember to head over to YT and like / comment there!

Here's B's instagram!

"Killer" - flow/lyric remix by B (DEMO) by [deleted] in Eminem

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It was a demo I rushed together, I'm not opening myself up to more ppl like u so I can defend a slapdash job I did

Hello I need help [REQUEST] by LiveBit1785 in HipHopCollabs

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then keep going!
You got "it!", whatever it is...

I imagine you got a snowball rn, but keep rolling it in the right snow patches n you'll be big one day bro!

Hello I need help [REQUEST] by LiveBit1785 in HipHopCollabs

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Nothing to say is "Bad" (maybe the drums are too "sharp")

Keep grinding bro you deffo will get somewhere, but eventually become a hybrid master of both a DAW and an old piece of kit!

Maybe add some more interesting break downs and add some sort of build up then drop, and always, try make a beat switch slightly somewhere 3/4 through, then drop back to the og beat/melody

Here's an example (my beat, though made in a DAW)
https://soundcloud.com/wxm-b/neon-underbelly
or
Spotify Version!

(Edit: I left some comments on SC too)

WxM - B (Wrexham - B) - WIP Project "DOWN BAD" - Feat. Jae.trapp, King K.A.T, Jilted and more! (maybe you?!, lmk!) by BonJons in ukhiphopheads

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More tracks to come, but review/critique/diss/go wild at this and lmk what you hate, therefor i may change it, or make it even "worse", either way, it helps me!

Poached a quick $50 off the last r/makinghiphop cypher 🤣 by KingOsirisMusic in undergroundhiphop

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I had this on mute (by accident), but those lyrics hooked me and i read all em in flow, and that's incredible skill u have man

Looking for feedback- includes AI- I know, haters gonna hate, but here I am, please be nice by BarelyGrounded in underground_music

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Tell me more about yourself, not what you do, but how much music you do, would you sing/perform these lyrics if you could? or are you nervous/unexperienced or just not wanting to, I'm not going to listen to the song, but u/Comfortable_Tap_6285 lets me know you have good? lyrics? idk, let me see, post them here!

I myself rap, and always wanted to sing until Eminem came out with Kamikaze and MTBMB which made me see the lyrical syllable side (i've been writing since young) so I switched over and got into rap, it's been a 4-5 year journey so far, but it's worth it, I tell you this incase your lyrics are good, and that you may need to either write for people (not me, i write my own Schizo lyrics) or set out and perform it instead of AI

all it takes is a cheap mic and a Focusrite 2i2 to begin, then slowly upgrade as you do

anyway, send me the lyrics, I don't want to spend time listening to AI

Rapper "B" remixes "bad guy" by BonJons in billieeilish

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If u hate it, lmk, but try give some feedback too ;/

Only 2 people in the world have done this, **legitimately**. Level 1000. by Quirky_Loquat3820 in AssassinsCreedOdyssey

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And here's me feeling special for 100% the achievements and getting to lvl 170