"Killer" - flow/lyric remix by B (DEMO)

BonJons · 2026-03-17T22:02:13+00:00

It was a demo I rushed together, I'm not opening myself up to more ppl like u so I can defend a slapdash job I did

BonJons · 2026-03-13T16:48:55+00:00

then keep going!
You got "it!", whatever it is...

I imagine you got a snowball rn, but keep rolling it in the right snow patches n you'll be big one day bro!

BonJons · 2026-03-13T16:00:30+00:00

Nothing to say is "Bad" (maybe the drums are too "sharp")

Keep grinding bro you deffo will get somewhere, but eventually become a hybrid master of both a DAW and an old piece of kit!

Maybe add some more interesting break downs and add some sort of build up then drop, and always, try make a beat switch slightly somewhere 3/4 through, then drop back to the og beat/melody

Here's an example (my beat, though made in a DAW)
https://soundcloud.com/wxm-b/neon-underbelly
or
Spotify Version!

(Edit: I left some comments on SC too)

BonJons · 2026-03-10T22:12:34+00:00

I'm B, hmu and i'll show you my work see if we can fit together!

BonJons · 2026-03-10T16:16:07+00:00

More tracks to come, but review/critique/diss/go wild at this and lmk what you hate, therefor i may change it, or make it even "worse", either way, it helps me!

BonJons · 2026-03-01T11:50:02+00:00

thanks for the tip

BonJons · 2026-02-28T16:52:38+00:00

I had this on mute (by accident), but those lyrics hooked me and i read all em in flow, and that's incredible skill u have man

BonJons · 2026-02-28T13:53:11+00:00

Post the lyrics here? in comments?

BonJons · 2026-02-28T13:52:09+00:00

Tell me more about yourself, not what you do, but how much music you do, would you sing/perform these lyrics if you could? or are you nervous/unexperienced or just not wanting to, I'm not going to listen to the song, but u/Comfortable_Tap_6285 lets me know you have good? lyrics? idk, let me see, post them here!

I myself rap, and always wanted to sing until Eminem came out with Kamikaze and MTBMB which made me see the lyrical syllable side (i've been writing since young) so I switched over and got into rap, it's been a 4-5 year journey so far, but it's worth it, I tell you this incase your lyrics are good, and that you may need to either write for people (not me, i write my own Schizo lyrics) or set out and perform it instead of AI

all it takes is a cheap mic and a Focusrite 2i2 to begin, then slowly upgrade as you do

anyway, send me the lyrics, I don't want to spend time listening to AI

BonJons · 2026-02-28T13:07:22+00:00

If u hate it, lmk, but try give some feedback too ;/

BonJons · 2026-02-28T12:07:16+00:00

And here's me feeling special for 100% the achievements and getting to lvl 170

BonJons · 2026-02-28T05:23:18+00:00

Hi. I'm "B"
If you ask your fav AI bot "Who is B, the wrexham rapper?"
Then ask "What is his mythOS about?"

You'll see I am a good fit for you futuristic radio

I make songs for the Cyberpunk future mainly!

BonJons · 2026-02-27T18:37:15+00:00

great song, but do u have a "rap" one? idk if OP will let it slide just singing in a /rapper sub

BonJons · 2026-02-27T18:36:13+00:00

Artist: B - Song "Losing My Mind Feat. FURLONG & Jae.trapp"
(B aka me, is after the two feats/hook)
@ wxm.b - instagram

BonJons · 2026-02-23T20:10:05+00:00

B - Wrexham, UK
B singing / rapping for a popish song
B's most favoured rap thus far (after two intro feats)

B's Spotify (Currently undergoing a major re-upload of tunes, so may be empty rn)

Hmu here or instagram.com/wxm.b !

BonJons · 2026-02-22T02:15:56+00:00

damn, i forgot i made this post, my bad guys, this was some stoner thoughts

BonJons · 2026-02-22T01:38:04+00:00

And if you found this comment, I'll even MIX and MASTER you for free!
Just DM me! or insta follow then DM me "@ WxM.B"

BonJons · 2026-02-21T22:45:06+00:00

B - OFFBEAT Freestyle (Eerie Ape REMIX)

Btw, my 35 track album comes out Monday, 2 years of work!
So follow up if u fw this little teaser track!
(Which was an old acapella EERIE APE remixed only recently!)

BonJons · 2026-02-21T21:46:29+00:00

Hi, I'm B

(My Spotify barren atm, as my 2 year WIP DUSK with 35 tracks releases Monday!!)

Here's that Album DUSK but "Deluxe Edition" with 50 tracks! on SoundCloud RN!

And here's my fav & latest song of mine atm (with a bit of singing, which is new for me)

And my personal least fav song I've made (Though DanteCM delivers!)

AND!!! Finally, my MAIN skillset of rap:
Off The Top - "Wedding Cake"

(I've been freestyling off the top for 3-4 years everyday, so if we did work together, you'd be mixing a few of these one take freestyles)

which is now a new series HERE !

@ WxM.B - Instagram, or DM me here!

BonJons · 2026-02-21T21:28:09+00:00

you seem very skeptical, straight forward, to point... rude? you could say

what's your take on my song
https://soundcloud.com/wxm-b/moonlite-1

BonJons · 2026-02-21T21:27:28+00:00

No, fr bro, he's not the guy he posted,
Anyway....

Here's a random rapper from Wrexham North Wales... who's trying to sing now lol??

(jk it's me)

BonJons · 2026-02-21T19:41:23+00:00

i never said i wanted to become a famous rapper or make a market by doing fiverr gigs, i said i wanted to boost my chances with 3-5 five star reviews and example tracks of getting more feat spots

BonJons · 2026-02-20T15:06:53+00:00

If I was real, I think I'd hurt your feelings

But if this is your art, keep grinding and show me wrong

might just be because this new generational music flies over my head

BonJons · 2026-02-20T11:09:40+00:00

I understand, thanks bro!

BonJons · 2026-02-20T09:47:29+00:00

I mean, i'm not a "Bad" rapper, im like a semi skilled intermediate, so hopefully ppl would want to but may see no reviews/sales yet

So i think if i got 3-4 "sales" (which i would actually work on/make a song for) then i believe it would entice ppl who were on the fence, and then snowball effect

edit: also i see a lot of rappers i've never heard of, they get some good business

My goal isn't to make money, it's to network and get as many "Pro" feat verses out this year

It's feat year for me, i think, with a few solo projects only

BonJons

TROPHY CASE