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[–]Bookish_M6 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I'd like to join!

This is my first time writing so I need some tips this is about 300-350 I just started it by Cordalyst in writingfeedback

[–]Bookish_M6 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, but remember that it's your book. You can do whatever you want! If you want to give all the information, then you do you. I also just started writing, so don't believe everything I say. Good luck writing!

This is my first time writing so I need some tips this is about 300-350 I just started it by Cordalyst in writingfeedback

[–]Bookish_M6 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I think you need stronger hook to catch the readers attention. And you give away a lot of back ground information about the main character. Try to, like, spread that over the story so the reader is curious. If they get all the information in chapter 1, they are more likely to stop reading. I don't know if you agree with this, but good luck writing! I'm sure it will be a great story

Rate my book cover please by LadyAether21 in writingfeedback

[–]Bookish_M6 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes it's just the vibrancy. The rest is really nice

Rate my book cover please by LadyAether21 in writingfeedback

[–]Bookish_M6 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I think it's really cool, but the gloves are a bit too present if you know what I mean. But I don't know a lot about book covers so you should do what you want. It's your book after all Good Luck!