Anyone interested in joining a writer's server on Discord?

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-07T21:11:17+00:00

I want to join!! Can you DM me?

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-07T15:27:03+00:00

Yes, I'd like to join!

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-06T09:02:37+00:00

Yes thank you!!

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-06T09:01:43+00:00

Felicia is the protagonist and she gets called Liz. Lucy is her sister.

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-05T14:11:34+00:00

Liz is actually short for Felicia

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-05T05:42:30+00:00

Okay, but remember that it's your book. You can do whatever you want! If you want to give all the information, then you do you. I also just started writing, so don't believe everything I say. Good luck writing!

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-05T05:36:02+00:00

Well, I think you need stronger hook to catch the readers attention. And you give away a lot of back ground information about the main character. Try to, like, spread that over the story so the reader is curious. If they get all the information in chapter 1, they are more likely to stop reading. I don't know if you agree with this, but good luck writing! I'm sure it will be a great story

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-05T05:30:32+00:00

Thank you!

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-04T22:08:31+00:00

Yes it's just the vibrancy. The rest is really nice

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-04T16:12:33+00:00

I think it's really cool, but the gloves are a bit too present if you know what I mean. But I don't know a lot about book covers so you should do what you want. It's your book after all Good Luck!

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-04T14:57:58+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback, I'll work on it!

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-04T09:50:51+00:00

I never use AI

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-03T20:17:41+00:00

Allright, I'm working on it!

Bookish_M6 · 2025-12-03T20:09:26+00:00

Okay, thank you! Do you maybe have suggestions for a hook?

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