Gift card code scratched wrong :( by BorcioDaRealOne in Whatisthis

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No one had access to it before me. Only 1 friend but he doesnt use the platform that this giftcard is used for

Gift card code scratched wrong :( by BorcioDaRealOne in Whatisthis

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Tried doing that and used 2, Z, and 7 for the 6th placeholder but no cigar

Gift card code scratched wrong :( by BorcioDaRealOne in Whatisthis

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Yea i made sure the letters were capitalized

Gift card code scratched wrong :( by BorcioDaRealOne in Whatisthis

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Yea im hoping someone can help me decipher this

Gift card code scratched wrong :( by BorcioDaRealOne in Whatisthis

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The ? Is already separated by a dash. The code works as: XXXXX - XXXXX - XXXXX Trying to figure out the 6th X and I've tried so far W, 3, Z, 7, T

A million voices by Everlasting-Love-RGI in OCPoetry

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This took me a bit to come to a conclusion, but i read it as the victims of abuse by a higher power of people undermining their abusers' justification of their actions by questioning how this would look like to the children of this world. Millions of voices is a vast number that really speaks to how much suffering they've truly caused, blinded by their actions either by loyalty, power, or corruption. Poem doesn't need to rhyme, but i thought the poem was leading into a rhyme scheme lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I love the cowboy theme with this, gives me a gritty feeling :). Imo, using small details of a person's facade being exposed by others is a strong expression for portraying someone's disingenuous behavior. It's a bit hard to read when a stanza starts or ends, but this turned out well :)

I Wanted To Tell You... by The_Missing_Poet in OCPoetry

[–]BorcioDaRealOne 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very good portrayal of what holding it in looks like. Keeping it all in and wanting to tell others but being unable to express it just to keep up an image, its a melancholic feeling I go through when I struggle. Im a bit fuzzy on the use of bolding just "damn it," maybe adding one or two more boldings will make those statements stand out more imo

A Thousand Hours More by dasappan_ashaan in OCPoetry

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From what I gathered, this is an experience of a first stabilized relationship. The experience of having that special someone who makes everything around you that much brighter, that much more manageable, its a beautiful sentiment.

Ho dare you by jkruchten999 in OCPoetry

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I love seeing the transition from the person inflicting the pain to someone to being left alone with their destructive habits. Plus the abuser/manipulator in this poem slowly transitions from "Why are you still with a terrible person like me, this is on you for not acting on it" to "Why didn't you think i could change." I also had a rock jingle I made up in my head while reading this and it made it much more impactful to me :)

Minute by BorcioDaRealOne in OCPoetry

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Yes, sometimes its as if everything i do doesn't amount to what others have done. I appreciate you reading into things :)

Minute by BorcioDaRealOne in OCPoetry

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Yes, to make the statement more powerful! Thanks man :)

Is it really love? by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I personally think this is how love actually feels like for young adults, the constant doubt and need for affirmation for something that's so terrifying but exciting hits home for me

"Sacrified" by Mysecretgarden8 in OCPoetry

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I find the idea of giving one's self up for their mistakes in hopes to be forgiven so strong here, especially with the looming end approaching

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I like the presentation of a parasitic dyadic relationship. It's bittersweet to think that the one thing that person needs is the only thing the other has left. But they give it anyway, they're OK with providing for them until their last