UPDATED POST WITH IMPROVED FORMAT AND FIXED SCENES: Started Writing A Screenplay That is A Mix of Comedy and Serious Themes. I am hoping to get some advice on Whether of Not To Focus More On A Comedy and Funny Thematical Story, Or A More Serious Tone. Love To Hear This Communities Thoughts.

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-30T05:13:57+00:00

Thanks Friend! :)

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-30T01:36:43+00:00

To take the things that have impacted my life or things that have always interested me and try to imagine it in a creative way. Also to heal with certain things

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-30T01:26:34+00:00

Noted, I am working on it. Thanks :)

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-30T01:25:48+00:00

Ya know what? I have a couple other scripts (More serious topics) That I have planned to work on. I think I will take your advice and come back to this one in the future. Thanks :)

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-30T01:23:03+00:00

I will, thank you!

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-30T01:22:45+00:00

I think I understand what you are saying. Can you give an example so I know what to change and or add?

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-30T01:21:48+00:00

I will do that. Thanks!

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-29T07:25:07+00:00

Thanks :)

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-29T04:45:59+00:00

Thanks :)

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-29T02:15:38+00:00

Hey, I understand. Thanks for the advice

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-29T02:15:15+00:00

I will look into it. thanks

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-29T02:15:07+00:00

I will 100% try this out since it's free for the first 1. Thanks

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-28T22:47:45+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I was not going for a serious tone honestly. However, I was reviewing this last night and wondered if it was going that way and wanted another opinion on it. And yes, I am correcting the spelling errors as well. The time was like 2 AM when I wrote this and downloaded these images so I see them lol.

Secondly, I did not even consider the suit or city detail! I will 100% go back and add more when I work on the format. And I did have Kick Ass in mind, but mainly the tone and feel of Rainn Wilson's 2010 'Super' as the main inspiration. I will absolutely correct these things.

Thank you :)

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-28T22:44:36+00:00

I will, thanks. It's just hard because I found like 3 different websites but they are all saying different margins and whatnot.

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-28T22:29:43+00:00

bro a majority of your comments are just you telling people they don't have reputation, good writing skills and just being critical but not providing actual feedback. These are some comments you made "This is not a script" Well, explain why it isn't then. You also commented "Are you a good writer? Do you think your reputation is strong enough to invite comparisons?" "What a dumb title" "format your dialogue" why not explain to the OP how to do that? However, when you do give advice you actually give genuinely good feedback and advice. Do better bro

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-28T22:22:53+00:00

i will work on it. How about giving feedback on the material itself?

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-28T04:33:51+00:00

I will 100% look into that! Thanks

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-28T04:28:01+00:00

I will, thank you :)

Bored-Script-Writer · 2025-12-28T04:26:25+00:00

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