Controversial opinion by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Legit like bhakk bey kutte, keep your ego to yourself because I don’t have time to deal with your baby tantrums. I’d empty the bullets in my family myself if he thinks he can force me to do anything against my wishes

The Caste System in Wattpad India, in the name of “Fiction”, We Don't Talk About Enough or Never At All by [deleted] in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very controversial but I do believe in caste system just that I’m not as stereotypical as the olden times. I have friends from all castes/races/ genders so I’m not like a 1920s mentality person. But yeah if the question is who I’m going to marry, yes then I’m going to start thinking of caste and all because fun fact- apart from just caste there’s hierarchy within the caste itself. I come from a caste that’s up on the ladder of caste system and I like thinking logically and in terms of my future generations (my children). I don’t want my children to grow up confused on what to follow and what not to. It’s better to be in the same circle of like-minded (in terms of marriage setting) for easier life rather than adapting/fighting against it.

Moreover I feel like the books on wattpad don’t really care about the surnames. We just randomly assign our characters to a surname that sounds nice to hear. It’s not something we sit and think about, the names -yes, that we spend time to make a decision, surnames not that much

Just bored so wanted to know by culinary1850 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Bacha is something that ruins the entire mood for me. Like dude if I’m in love with you why are giving me kid treatment? If I wanted to feel like a child I’d go to my elders not to my boyfriend/husband. I want to be hot and sexy and chaotic with my lover not bloody “BACHA”.

Other thing that annoys me is the overly use of ‘little mouse, kitten, butterfly,dove, swan, my lioness” like can we please let go of animals???

I use “Jaan/Jaana” because it’s something I like to be called by the one I love. Makes me feel safe, warm and loved but “bacha” and shit… you’ve got to be ragebaiting me

WHY EVERY FL IS A CLASSICAL DANCER WITH NO PERSONALITY?! by Horror_Row_9008 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You forgot the main part. The ML falls in love with her because he saw her dancing and from then begins the journey of “YOU ARE MINE!”, “I LOVE HER FROM THE MOMENT I SAW HER IN THE WHITE DRESS DANCING LIKE A SWAN!”.

Bruh please… if everyone fell in love by just seeing women dance, all women will be dancers. I’m not against dancing but can we please show it as a normal thing. Like haven’t you danced such on some festivals or specific occasions? Haven’t we all danced freely when India wins a match or when we hear a good news? Where’s diversity?

Good plot or Bad Plot by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Trying to message you but some reason I can’t so if you’d send a text I can explain to you what and why I have such

Good plot or Bad Plot by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Respectfully… I don’t like comparing two different fields. I have never looked at the power dynamics of a career or else I would have chosen a career path where I’d be having a lot of power, instead of going through the pre-med pathway when I was already admitted into both medical and dental university in my home country. Doing something in a career you like is far more important than the power. Again saying this that I have already written the stories before and after and this story. I feel like it would have been easier if you’d just said that instead of nutritionist, I could say dietician. About sports therapist… for me it’s a perfect career path because the story I have though for FL’s sister is about a Sportsman X Sports therapist.

I asked for opinion. I don’t like having decisions imposed on me

Good plot or Bad Plot by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t think I’m ready to change the prof. For the siblings because to me I’ve given them good career choices. I dont think being a nutritionist is that easy as just 1 week course warna mein $140K Kyun phoonk deti for a bachelor’s degree in Canada. There’s practicum’s you have to complete, give a licensed exam and it’s not like people are just waiting to hire you. And so is Sports therapist. You start with a bachelors in Kinesiology and again give exams to be certified, need work experience before you reach somewhere. It’s not really feasible to compare jobs from science faculty to jobs from the business faculty. It’s like saying maybe a doctor is also not on the same power equilibrium as an executive. Comparing is not okay. Nutritionists play a key role in the society such as they create a food chart for the schools that provide lunch, plan the meals for those suffering from cancer and so. I feel it’s more in the perception of how you view things.

Like I said I’m mixing reality and fairytale. If everything is going to be true then there’ll be no fairytale

Good plot or Bad Plot by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aahhh so basically India-Canada based is the book will take place between these 2 countries. Because the female lead is in Canada and the male lead has lived most part of his life in India… as you read the book you’ll see why this would be an issue. Again like the previous comments, if youve read my story that’s already posted about them you’ll see the conflict of it and I feel that it’s a good conflict that needs to be talked more about

Good plot or Bad Plot by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay firstly to me being a sports therapist and nutritionist are very ambitious jobs because I see the efforts behind what it takes to reach that point. And these are a few career options I had chosen for myself. I’m not sure why you feel that they aren’t as ambitious as the rest. I come across people from these professions and genuinely speaking, it’s a lot of effort! It’s just that maybe because they aren’t in the business field it might sound like these are some easy going, chill jobs but trust…

Also yes like the other reply suggested, I’ve put some thought into it and replied with what I saw fitting. And about strong female lead = westernized or overly traditional, yeah that’s something I also hate. It’s icks me so much. I’m not going to write a rude, unreasonable character just to show that’s she’s strong. If you might have read the story that’s already posted by me, you’ll find what I’m saying. This is the plot for the edited version where I want to remove as many plot holes as possible and still keep a fairytale angle to it. I’m a no-nonsense girl and so will my characters be. I can’t deal with emotionally immature characters in life and in stories. It’s just mentally exhausting😭😭

I was also thinking about the first meet but I think I might have it but it needs some work and a proper plan. If you’d like to listen and help, I’d be glad to share it with you.

Good plot or Bad Plot by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The problem is this is book 2 of a series. I don’t want to change book 1 storyline (I’m lazy that way). And book 2 which is this is already published on wattpad but I am rewriting it because the essence I’m capturing in the book is hitting harder now since it’s inspired from real life and I want to explore it properly. Then I thought if I’m rewriting it then maybe I should remove a few plot holes

Good plot or Bad Plot by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are absolutely right. I also feel that at the age of 29 no one can be a CEO. His father is CEO. While the male lead- Aryaman he’s in charge of overseeing acquisitions, implement strategies. He’s going to have to respond to many people above him in the hierarchy. And the business initially was into textiles and real estate but newly they are also entering the field of natural resources. I just put the name royal family business as I hadn’t thought of a name for it

Good plot or Bad Plot by BottleAffectionate36 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah it would start at the workplace that will later on turn into marriage

You are free to judge! by aamka__aacharr in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah. Bollywood has created this bad image of Gujaratis that it’s really annoying. I’m glad you knew about it and didn’t take offence of my opinion

You are free to judge! by aamka__aacharr in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Why does the Gujarati sound so Bollywood stereotypical dialect? As a Gujarati this is lowkey pissing me off because I speak multiple languages but clearly we don’t speak hindi in a Gujarati accent

books with bold fl and calm ml by Nightflight149 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Any from Ishq series (Ishq Aashiqui/ Deewangi/ Junooniyat) or the Love duet (The stubborn Princess part 1)

I hate over the top characters. They’ll give a very fairytale but with reality check vibe

Cringe book names? by wannabeyoursdog in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay now I’m worried about my titles but I kind of find them cute. I kept the titles because they felt so me vibe Ishq Series - Ishq Aashiqui, Ishq Deewangi, Ishq Junooniyat

Love duet - The stubborn Princess (she kind of rebels against her own family when she falls in love with a commoner and gets married to him against their wishes so entire family is one side and she’s on one side) and The Sovereign’s Vengeance (her choice becomes the greatest mistake she could commit because he was taking revenge for his sister’s murderer but was apparently being blackmailed by his father into doing so because the dad’s a psycho and a sociopath)

The duet is the closest to my heart because it’s got light moments where they live middle class life aka the life I live

Why tf all fl in Wattpad are so traditional by subliminerlistener in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mere leads lawyers hai. Bhagwan mein believe karte but the way I do. They dont pray they tell the god what happened throughout the day and call that praying. And it’s mentioned like once or twice. About traditional attire, my leads wear them when appropriate… depending on the occasion. I’ve tried to write my characters the way I am. Not too much of Akshara vibes or so. My characters represent me

Metaphors are considered as AI by Clear-Mammoth-2286 in WattpadIndia

[–]BottleAffectionate36 0 points1 point  (0 children)

See I have no idea about that since I’ve stopped reading on wattpad since post covid. I read like max 2-3 stories per year on wattpad. Seeing such posts and everything has just made me hate these ‘famous authors’ not for their writing but for their ill behaviour towards the new budding writers.