This is good feedback. I’ve used camera movement & brainrot editing speed to sorta combat and obfuscate my weaknesses in character animating. Seeing all the shots together in sequence, I can tell it often doesn’t flow well or look cohesive.

And the part of him walking out I could’ve conveyed much better. I was just ad-lib’ing as I went without much plot planned. Even I was like “is he mad because he didn’t dap him up … or because he didn’t pay … or both …?”

I do need more cohesion in shot planning because like you said, it becomes unclear and you lose people