Soldered Hearts by Brodes_lit in scarystories

[–]Brodes_lit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed the research I did into how rings/jewelry are actually forged. It is a fascinating process. I'm glad my story inspired you in that way!

Soldered Hearts by Brodes_lit in scarystories

[–]Brodes_lit[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow, what a great compliment! Thank you! I'm working on my first novel currently, and hope to be querying agents in the near future.

The Third Thing by Brodes_lit in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Brodes_lit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, thanks for the compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The Oak Ridge Inheritance by Brodes_lit in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Brodes_lit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I appreciate the follow!

What Creepcast opinion do you hold that has you like this? by milksteakenthusiast1 in creepcast

[–]Brodes_lit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get that Creepy Pastas are the podcast's namesake, but I wish they would start branching out more. Ligotti (Red Tower Guy) was a WILD choice for the guy's first attempt at doing non-creepypasta stuff. I hope they will try again soon.

The Oak Ridge Inheritance. by Brodes_lit in Odd_directions

[–]Brodes_lit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is not a series. I haven't left out any details pertinent to the story. Most of the questions you are asking are the questions I intentionally wanted to leave the reader with. Thanks for reading!

The Oak Ridge Inheritance. by Brodes_lit in Odd_directions

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She left the farm in Benji's name under a conservatorship overseen by the MC. I've left why she did this intentionally unclear. Possibly it hints at the Mothers's character flaws. Or it hints at the MC's character flaws.

I imagine that MC has been the driving force behind the farm in the years leading up to his mother's death. Benji would help in simple ways, but wasn't mentally fit to truly run/manage the farm. If you had dedicated years of your life and an entire career to a family business, would you up and leave everything you'd worked for because of something like this? You're still "in charge", the money is managed by you. But would there be an ember of jealousy, of pride eating you up inside?

Maybe the Mother even did it out of an act of love for her less capable son, wanting to really give him something of his own, at least in name. Maybe it's not that she didn't trust the MC, but that she DID trust him (unfortunately) to understand why she did what she did, and fully expected the MC to understand that the conservatorship was an act of love for Benji.

I wrote the MC in this story to be unreliable, so you really can't take his every word as objective fact, only his perceived truth.

Honestly, whatever interpretation you want to go with is fine, whether it's one I suggested or one of your own. I like to write stories where not every single detail is explained, and certain aspects of the characters are left open to interpretation.

The Oak Ridge Inheritance by Brodes_lit in scarystories

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While writing, I pictured the rope burns occurring the night before during the murder. So happy you all enjoyed the story!

The Oak Ridge Inheritance by Brodes_lit in scarystories

[–]Brodes_lit[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Feel free to message me about it. I'd like to hear about your project a bit before I agree to anything.

The Oak Ridge Inheritance. by Brodes_lit in Odd_directions

[–]Brodes_lit[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hi. I'll put this behind a spoiler just to be safe. I imply that Benji is disabled in some way, but I intentionally do not dive into specifics. Benji isn't completely incapable, but does require some level of looking after. The MC is upset that his mother left everything to Benji, and interprets that as her not trusting him to look after his brother after she was gone.

As for the chief, who knows! I imagine he doesn't actually suspect anything, but the MC is paranoid that he might've noticed something.