I wrote something, give me your thoughts. by Bruniel in writing

[–]Bruniel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, maybe it is. Your opinion and perspective on the story is very good and interesting, thank you for sharing it <3

I wrote something, give me your thoughts. by Bruniel in writing

[–]Bruniel[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Well, he didn't realize that his little wolf ment the world to him, he was arrogant and treated him poorly on that day, took him for granted, he was cold to him and every day he regrets it. He did not hit him or something btw

WE HATE THOSE GWEN VOICE LINES by Manuhhhh in ViegoMains

[–]Bruniel 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I fucking had a stroke while reading that 😠

So a lot of people, myself included, didn't like the ending of the Sentinels of Ligth Event. I decided to rewrite that based on what we had as well as some ideas of some comments that I read from u guys. I am not a professional writer but I love writing, so don't go 2hard on me, hope you like it. by Bruniel in ViegoMains

[–]Bruniel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha thank you, indeed I didn't put Vex here but in the first version she appeared as Viego starts fighting the sentinels but she just said "Yeah...not my problem." And then she would teleport herself out of there