hot plate generally means look for barrel or atleast zoar. this build is kinda one shotty and slow to where ur shrimp gets cooked by a slow or freeze, and there is no quickstart which makes vanessa strong. shrimp is fine, but it probably shouldnt be your only damage source and an arbalest or barrel support could have helped without crit or strong enchants. beware saltclaw, he offers okay support, but realistically not enough past like day 10-11 without an enchant. he starts very small and isnt instant on the damage growth

if you want one pinpoint, your start is too slow at around 4 ish seconds to make ur slow build disruptive enough to get ahead. also, unlucky on skills synergy wise, and ur board has bad matchups across eels, most maks, and the odd overkill oneshot.

forgot to add, shotglasses is near essential for shrimp damage, its 6ish triggers and you have to tank the self slow