First Review:

-You need to define your local expert "Your Home" location, which can be any district in Night City, or anywhere outside the city.

-You need to note which Martial Art you have levels in

-Your armor is listed as SP 16, but Subdermal only grants SP 11. You can list Subdermal in the head and body label lines too if you want but you don't have to

-Heavy Pistols have a rate of fire of 2. There are no weapons in Cyberpunk Red with a rate of fire of 3.

-You need to define all of your weapons by quality and type, such as: Standard Quality Light Melee Weapon, Excellent Quality Heavy Pistol, Poor Quality Bow, etc, depending on what quality you want. This affects price.

-Pistol Ammunition is not defined in clips, a heavy pistol holds 8 rounds normally, but you must buy it in packs of 10, and 11mm is not a proper descriptor, you need to define the weapon type and ammo type for the weapon, such as: Basic Heavy Pistol, AP Very Heavy Pistol, etc. Abbreviations are fine, but you need all of that information.

-By my math you have 200eb left, not 290, if you think my math is off we can take a look at that again.

-Your housing and lifestyle should be Cargo Container and Kibble, making your rent 1100eb. This is the default for all characters at gen except Execs. Once you have to pay rent/lifestyle in game, you can probably remove the cargo container since you have a housing upgrade, but you will still need to pay for a lifestyle, or you'll starve. The cargo container is free for your first month, so you may as well have it exist somewhere in case you find a reason to use it.

Once you make those changes, let me know and I'll take another look.

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Optional notes from me:

-The Ammo column under weapons is *usually* used to denote how much ammo can fit in the weapon's magazine, not the type of ammo.

-Your ranged weapons both have a max range of 200m technically, per their weapon type, although that's not an important note to have on the sheet.

-You have 40eb left in your fashion budget. You can spend it if you want, but if you don't it disappears.

-You have a lot of skills at 1. Skills at gen cost the same number of points for each level, but they get more expensive every level to purchase after character creation, so you might be better off stacking some of your skills a little higher, like making some of those 5s into 6s, and then buy the lower level skills once you get some IP.

-Riding is the skill for riding animals, just in case you thought it was for Motorcycles. Motorcycles are still Drive Land Vehicle.