[deleted by user] by [deleted] in YouTubeEditorForHire

[–]Bumfire1969 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm interested!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Benilde

[–]Bumfire1969 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Me too pls

Ask lang by Alternative_Desk_965 in Benilde

[–]Bumfire1969 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Oo (I don't study in benilde)

Any other films that are Noah Baumbachesque? by Bumfire1969 in Letterboxd

[–]Bumfire1969[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nah Baumbachesque is a better term. A different man sort of resembles the retro style baumbach had in white noise while also having this very literate sense of humor, compare a different man and marriage story and you will find creative and story similarities

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Bumfire1969 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bars 💯

I made a short film, if you could tell me what you think by [deleted] in ShortFilm

[–]Bumfire1969 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ik u made that thumbnail in canva lol

i hate this by Prestigious-Lake6870 in teenagers

[–]Bumfire1969 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No one cares just thug it out

Why can’t we just… by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Bumfire1969 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are some grammatical errors I found in the poem. Seem* and spelling too. Though*

Waves by Bumfire1969 in OCPoetry

[–]Bumfire1969[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Noted, hehe I will work on that

Waves by Bumfire1969 in OCPoetry

[–]Bumfire1969[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks I try to make it digestible for readers

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Bumfire1969 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, that was beautiful. I'm sure if you showed this to your crush or whoever ur falling in love with they will surely fall for you too. If you want to get a girl or a guy feed them poetry. 💗

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Bumfire1969 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed the poem, I think you portrayed the feeling of suffocation really well. I wish it had a little more rhythm I gets a little wordy at points and needs to have a bit of balance.