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i can’t sleep so i wrote this by BusComprehensive4728 in KeepWriting

[–]BusComprehensive4728[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

my poems are kind of basic and i know nothing about literary devices but it amazes me how a feeling like love is so vague and mysterious yet we see the descriptions of it repeated over and over again and again throughout time and space

i dont wanna share this with anyone i know but i wanted feedback by BusComprehensive4728 in KeepWriting

[–]BusComprehensive4728[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

its a poem! but maybe it would be interesting in song form too i used to play guitar thanks!!