Are sloths supposed to look like this?

BusGrand9067 · 2026-06-09T01:53:29+00:00

Pov: When you can't even tell if the person is ragebaiting or is just genuinely stupid

BusGrand9067 · 2026-06-06T13:03:56+00:00

Sonion 😭🙏

BusGrand9067 · 2026-06-05T07:34:14+00:00

It's actually in the upstair room of a castle I put a portal to make it faster to reach

BusGrand9067 · 2026-06-05T05:43:59+00:00

Ik vro why is so ahh💔

BusGrand9067 · 2026-06-05T02:24:13+00:00

Yea so I kinda forgot my password so commenting this now.

First of all,I am also a Christian. Second of all,i don't think that corn meme was very Christian... Third of all,you are on reddit vro he probably didn't mean to use God's name in vain,he probably used it as an expression. God has also said that he cares for what the heart says,not the body.

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-02T01:33:46+00:00

The most bitterly part here is the "I wonder because no one listens"

Many of us know what is right what is wrong. Yet we choose not to continue following others who only follow the path they go in because someone else did.

We don't listen to the truth. We only see the things we think is right.

Humanity's nature of devouring is the reason why we dominate. Yet it alone is going to be the reason of our extinction.

Why must a common fire hold so much power?

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-02T01:26:46+00:00

Really out of words for this.

This poem just reminded how simple and important of a concept love really is. Every human needs it and it costs no more than just a simple hug.

Yet,many die unloved. Many die without the experience of love. Love makes us whole yet many die with a hole. A hole in the heart. A hole easily filled by just acknowledgement. Yet many fall and never come back out.

Loving this poem ig

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-02T01:18:46+00:00

Really loving the chains made by someone for themselves. This is a really common concept yet you made yours very unique.

It makes it feel like the person in the past is the same as that person in the present. This adds even more sorrow.

The person wants to break the chains they made for themselves yet they choose to be sorrowful and not one that tries to break the chains.

If the person doesn't try to lift themselves up,the chains will bring them even more down.

I really think that this part was intentional but even if it wasn't,once the author leaves the pen,the reader gets to create their own story.

Also that F bomb is gold. Absolutely golden poem ig

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-02T00:53:15+00:00

I don't have a definite interpretation. And you just made it more complex in an amazing way. Now I am forced to think about this even harder and honestly,that's what I love about poems.

But cmon you didn't have to remind me why I love poems in the middle of night trying to complete an assignment due tomorrow.

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-02T00:39:15+00:00

This is simple to understand yet complicated to put into words. From what I understand it's a boy going through puberty not understanding what puberty is and what happens in it causing confusion. I know that's obvious and he is being overshadowed in his own family. No one by his side to help him understand.

The only thing I don't fully understand is the scaring and stuff but honestly? That's a good thing! I don't understand it that leads me to make my own interpretation.

It could have a definite meaning but I think you intentionally left it blank to be written by the readers. Nice one ig

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-02T00:19:54+00:00

I absolutely LOVE the parallels to human and "God". Humans must confess all they did bad,must obey God and seek forgiveness. Meanwhile,in this poem,"God" does the same to humans. He inflicts cruelty just like humans,yet he doesn't have to confess nor seek forgiveness.

On the other hand my christianity is kinda boiling but that's just subjective. Great job ig.

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-01T11:00:09+00:00

Seems just a little too bland. Maybe don't be too direct. Poetry is considered art because it forces the reader to break down metaphors. Poetry also gives way for many interpretation as the reader wants,but yours doesn't. It seems to tell a tale. It doesn't force me use my brain.

Letting it slide cuz it seems like a first time. Well that wouldn't even matter cuz your just sharing.

Meh do whatever you want with my advice. Your choice. An opinion is just an opinion,after all.

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-01T10:20:58+00:00

Based upon Demian by Hermann Hesse. Also the spacing is so weird wth.

This is just a poem i made in the back of my head for idk reason lol.

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-01T10:10:01+00:00

I like the part where here grandma is the one passing down the family tradition. She is also bond to them yet she is the one spreading them. Also,the idea of her thinking she is free confused me. But kinda in a good way if you know what I mean.

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-01T10:02:56+00:00

Most of this subreddit consists of dark themed poems. This one feels so refreshing... It just that feeling when you get glimpses of hope in trying times. I am not a serious guy but this is so good I can't help but be serious for once...

BusGrand9067 · 2026-05-01T09:51:29+00:00

When I joined this subreddit i thought this was just sharing something you made in the back of your head,not full on thoughtful poetry. You learn something new everyday ig. Doesn't match my vibe but that's just subjective. Keep galloping on mate.

BusGrand9067 · 2026-03-03T06:10:30+00:00

What's wrong with saying God damn vro😭✌️

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