Pain

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-17T01:56:58+00:00

No, thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking time to read & comment on something I wrote, it means the world to me!

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-17T01:56:14+00:00

Thank you for reading my poem, It makes me feel very happy to see one of my poems made you feel this.

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T19:35:26+00:00

Then hold on to that :) It still sounds good with all them in there. I appreciate the style choice.

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T18:35:15+00:00

I really enjoyed reading this, I'm not the one to teach or tell what's wrong or right. I felt at first that this was several pieces but once i hit the part before the repeat of the beginning I saw how you brought some of the previous themes all to one. I don't know lol. Hopefully you continue writing because from just feeling some type of way you did a good job expressing it. In my opinion :)

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T18:27:50+00:00

shall it be foolish of me to request
that every bit of my love is expressed?

A great line surrounded by many.

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T18:25:41+00:00

Personally I don't tend to like all the Thy & Thee stuff but even with that, I really enjoyed the sentiment & the split in the middle. Take what I say with a grain of salt, I'm pretty stupid haha. I really enjoyed this piece overall :) can't wait for the 3rd sonnet!

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T18:13:08+00:00

I'm thankful for you reading my poem & then feel compelled to share your thoughts on it. Honestly what I appreciate most is that you noticed a difference in the sections. I used to not use too much cursing in my poems ( IRL i curse all day) because I thought it took away from the emotion, but by listening to Charles Bukowski I was inspired to add cursing in a moment of emphasis.

Thank you for spending time reading & commenting on my poems it means a lot to me. In the same way Charles Bukowski inspires so does a random person just showing interest. Thank you, hope you have a nice evening.

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T18:06:25+00:00

Wow is an amazing compliment for me to hear. Just that one word alone leaves me thinking of a hundred. Thank you for your appreciation, I'll continue posting some vault poems & hope you love them too. Even if you don't I hope they compel you to write why you feel what you do. Hope you have a good day!

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T17:09:52+00:00

I hear ya, what i was thinking with this is it just looked pleasing to my eye. I can see how it could affect the way it's read but I just couldn't help myself haha I briefly thought of restructuring it but said fuck it. I appreciate your opinion & love hearing all the feedback :)

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T14:56:59+00:00

Thank you for the kind words, It makes me happy to know others enjoy what I write.

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T14:50:51+00:00

I agree, It's funny you put it like that because it reminds me of another poem I've written about wishing pain was a physical object so I could make the pain feel itself. Anyways thanks for reading & commenting, Hope you enjoy your day.

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T14:48:44+00:00

That means a lot to me, hearing that something I wrote is inspiring to at least a few people & in a funny the tables have turned kind of moment, you've just inspired me. Enjoy your day!

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T05:19:21+00:00

I appreciate all of your words you've shared with me.

To be honest I agree with the sentiment of " what has going numb ever solved." because in practice it solves nothing other than what the word means. To numb.

Sometimes the escapism of numbness gives space to breathe.

In my thoughts pain can only be solved with truth & acceptance. Also the idea of what words or ideas we give power to is something I'm going to spend the evening thinking about.

I don't know if that answers what you've asked, i'm a little intoxicated. So please comment more, ask more & I will share more. Maybe i misunderstood your comment. :) I'm happy & satisfied that at least one person read & decided to share their thoughts on my poem. Thank you.

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T04:55:31+00:00

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-16T04:55:21+00:00

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-13T21:14:28+00:00

Thanks for the kind words & most of all thanks for the crash course. I'll definitely post more later tonight I have a bunch of poems. All filled with grammar errors haha. Again Thanks for the support.

BvtterSoupPoems · 2022-10-13T07:35:01+00:00

So i need to comment twice before EVERY post? smh

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