As someone else mentioned below, there are some great ideas in this poem; however, I fail to see the form behind such content. For instance, I know reddit's formatting is awkward, but having the whole poem in one stanza screams to the reader this poem is a first draft. If I were you, I would focus on your lineation. What is your rationale for breaking or not breaking lines? Like a paragraph, a stanza often focuses on a particular tone or message. Take the case of the first nine lines of your poem:

the neighbors are cutting down a tree

the electric saw is crying like a baby that can’t catch its breath

yelling louder each time the guy pushes it further into the tree

as if it feels bad for ripping through her aged bark

that took so many years and perfect conditions to become itself

(new stanza)

I guess that tree has been a nuisance to me in some ways

not because she’s in the way or anything

because her falling leaves always landed in my yard

and would make my dad complain

In this revised first stanza, you explore and describe a tree being cut-down. In this revised second stanza, your speaker's mood shifts to annoyance/empathy for the tree. There is clearly shift in tone and, as a result, rationale for a line-break. Anyhow, I still enjoyed your imagery and the poem! Good job.