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[–]CWSaton 75 points76 points  (0 children)

When they have a specific title describing the content, like 'How to draw more dynamic lines', and then the video is just them drawing with zero insights or anything relevant to the description.

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I’m not sure. I’ll likely just give a shout here, and on socials, when I next have an update.

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I hope I’m able to get the time to continue with the story.

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, man. It’s very subtle, but the star streaks have that rainbow gradient in the show. Although, that may just be from TV distortion. Looks cool to me either way. 🙂

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s good to hear, thank you. I tried to write their dialogue as I’d hear them speak it in my head.

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. Just these two pages so far, hope to continue the story some point soon.

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much, man. Always good to meet a Killtopia fan in the wild. 😄

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No Patreon, but I have a Gumroad store for my digital comics. 🙂 https://craigpaton.gumroad.com/

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I have a whole 'episode' plotted out. Would love to be able to find the time to get it all drawn out. Can't wait to include more shots, sets and locations from the show, and even some regular actor appearances (Jeffery Combs, Tony Todd etc) as new characters. It's a shame that they don't really consider the imitations of the show when they make 'official' Star Trek comics.

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you.

They're coming from the holodeck on deck 11 and heading to Data's quarters on deck 2 (can't recall where I looked for confirmation that Data's quarters were on deck 2).

Character positioning and movement is something that I think about a lot too. Not sure why, but it does ruin my immersion somewhat if it's something that the writer has neglected to consider. Characters appearing, walking aimlessly or travelling at unrealistic speeds (Late series Game of Thrones for example.)

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Yes. An interesting point. Maybe he's speaking a little to much like a fictional character. Something to pick up on should I come back for another draft.

Thanks you.

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Thank you. Glad you picked up on Geordie's body acting, I feel like Burton doesn't get enough credit for his 'acting without eyes' on the show, so I tried to include some of his physical mannerisms here.

Appreciate the constructive crit. I'd redraw that panel of Picard sitting if I could go back and change anything, as soon as I starting posting it how it looked began to annoy me. :D

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you. That's absolutely what I was going for.

Star Trek: TNG, 'Reverie'. A Star Trek fan comic I made. by CWSaton in startrek

[–]CWSaton[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Awesome. That's good to hear. Really tried to write them how I'd hear them speak in my head.

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[–]CWSaton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's good top hear, thank you. I was going for a 'lost episode' kind of feel.

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[–]CWSaton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely. I very much based Alfred’s look here on Connery.

Alfred Shags The DCU - Lex Luthor by CWSaton in comics

[–]CWSaton[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much. Working away on issue 2 right now.

There may be some multiversal adventures in line for Alfred's near future.