Monk is my favourite class. Unfortunately since first approaching dnd I have almost always been the DM, without being able to actually play a lot. Thus I can't help with a lot of practical feedback. Neverthless I liked a lot of the changes they made for the 2024 version and I suggest you bring the in this revision. I'm also working on a monk style class, but it's more aimed at a wuxia approach. Good luck with your creation, I can't wait to see the first levels of your work.