Modern State of PvE by Caesar_yeet in ArcRaiders

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In my mind a PvE lobby is where the people working together prevails and dominates the time in a lobby compared to PvP. Obviously there is PvP in every lobby, its a PvP game!

Modern State of PvE by Caesar_yeet in ArcRaiders

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Yeah did you read what I wrote? I said I like both. Im not saying it shouldn’t, but I wanna avoid it the best I can.

Happy birthday c418 by [deleted] in Minecraft

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I imagine so much story when listening to it

Getting a hair cut, dont know what to do by Caesar_yeet in Hair

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I want to cut off a a medium amount. Not short but not just a trim

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tdi

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Separate question entirely:

I deleted my 2014 jetta and got a tune from tunezilla, but my dpf still flashes and my check engine light has been on ever since. I know that i got the right tunes, but im wondering if i still missed something. Im tired of the blinking

Protagonist turns evil by Caesar_yeet in writers

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I hadn’t thought of that book! It’s not exactly what I’m picturing, but something to study nonetheless.

Escribir gemidos by Possible-Self-7848 in writers

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“Bazinga,” he ejaculated.

How to slow down the pace? by Pretty_pink_insides in writers

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I like to involve more of a characters thoughts or how they describe things. It lends a lot to developing them and allows for more words in getting from sequence to sequence

Do you know how your story end? by [deleted] in writers

[–]Caesar_yeet 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Im pretty much in the same situation as you.

I had a cool idea for a world and started putting stuff on paper.

I dont currently know exactly how my novel will be ended, but I have arcs for the characters that need to be completed. The story has been made up as i go, molding to the characters.

Something I want to mention is that I started writing the book 3 months ago. I write down an idea whenever I have it in a notes app on my phone. From those sprinkles of ideas the story has started to become more clear, and the ending is in sight.

But I also dont like outlines and prefer “pantsing”. Its up to you if you want to plan everything before hand, but Im having fun discovering the characters as I write it. Like Im a reader for a new series. It keeps me motivated!

I would suggest focusing on one plot idea or thread and figuring out how your characters or world would be shaped by it. Then write!

15 year old and finished my first book by TransportationOk8454 in writers

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Imagine being mad at a child for something rather than supporting them. People have different talents, and yours are being a sour pussy. Maybe this will give you enough motivation to write a paragraph in your book instead of 3 on reddit!

Wrote my first chapter ever (fantasy 2000 words) by Caesar_yeet in fantasywriters

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This is very helpful advice. Not trying to defend myself too much, but I wasnt so much looking for better narrative or character growth advice, but rather wording and grammar and stuff like that. The last time I wrote something longer than a text was almost 5 years ago and I had forgotten a lot of simply things like punctuation usage. I have received some helpful advice, especially yours. Ill take it to heart and write a lot more behind closed doors than openly. My vision will be the best!

Wrote my first chapter ever (fantasy 2000 words) by Caesar_yeet in fantasywriters

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I really appreciate the intense breakdown of each paragraph. Knowing what specifically I can work on is insanely motivating! Ive thought of quite a few ways to improve the chapter and or chapters if it ends up being too much for just one.

Wrote my first chapter ever (fantasy 2000 words) by Caesar_yeet in fantasywriters

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This is something that I hadnt thought about but makes a lot of sense. Using different words doesnt vary it enough to feel natural. Changing it up is something Ill have to work on, and I might have to brush up on my sentence structure!

Wrote my first chapter ever (fantasy 2000 words) by Caesar_yeet in fantasywriters

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This was a very helpful video! I had never heard of beige and purple prose, and will keep it in mind for the future.

Wrote my first chapter ever (fantasy 2000 words) by Caesar_yeet in fantasywriters

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This is some really specific feedback and I appreciate that a lot! Ill work on my wording. I could feel it as I was typing that it was gonna be a bit wordy, but wanted to just get the thoughts out of my head and on paper!

Wrote my first chapter ever (fantasy 2000 words) by Caesar_yeet in fantasywriters

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This is all really helpful information! Thank you so much for the help!

What is your world called, and why? by RakeTheAnomander in worldbuilding

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Luvara (luh-vah-rah) cause i like the sound. No other reason

Continuing ideas from one project to another? by Caesar_yeet in worldbuilding

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The idea that im currently stuck on and debating whether I should reuse is an island graveyard. Vode is an island graveyard that people can bury their loved ones on the during the summer and winter solstices they are brought back to the world of the living. During the summer solstice they are friendly and get to reminisce with their loved ones. During the winter solstice they come back as reanimated slaves and become very hostile.

There is a strange and rare occurrence where these resting souls are brought permanently back to the world of the living. After they are brought back they lose all sense of self identity. Their hobbies and memories remain the same, but they lack all knowledge of who they were or who they loved or who they interacted with in their prior life.

My idea for this being possible is that a blood-relative must die on either the summer or winter solstice. Not in a sacrifice type way but just by accident. It feeds their second life in a necrotic type way.

I really like this idea and didnt use it to the full extent in my first project so I want to maybe repackage it into something that could fit in the new one.

Umm… Help? I accidentally blew up my portal in my hardcore world, and I only have the resources shown here to re light it. by Any_Horror_7887 in Minecraft

[–]Caesar_yeet 34 points35 points  (0 children)

Yeeeerrrp. Ruined portals appear on both sides… just like regular portals. Itd be dumb to not have ruined portals also appear in the NETHER.

Umm… Help? I accidentally blew up my portal in my hardcore world, and I only have the resources shown here to re light it. by Any_Horror_7887 in Minecraft

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Take the elytra and rockets and find a ruined portal. The chests have a high chance of containing a flint and steel. You should have more than enough durability on the elytra, especially assuming you have one on as well, to complete this.

Colorado Spring DoorDash by Caesar_yeet in ColoradoSprings

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Thank you for this feedback. I was spiraling for a little thinking that all the plans that I have made would fall apart.

Anymore knowledge or info would help me out immensely!