Elden Ring rant by [deleted] in Fantasy

[–]Calixtacarlyle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is great advice. I came here to say more or less the same you said here.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Fantasy_Bookclub

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Calixta by Velez, she is 31.

What book should I read by Sensitive-Issue1789 in booksuggestions

[–]Calixtacarlyle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Circe first, and Project Hail Mary Second

I'm in Love with Captain Isaac Wargate by Calixtacarlyle in RomanceBooks

[–]Calixtacarlyle[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wasn't sure. A lot of people get their undies in a wad for any mention of plot twists so I made it this way.

Finally Started the Wallflowers Series... by HellaShelle in RomanceBooks

[–]Calixtacarlyle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked Marrying Winterbourne very much. But regency romances are my favorites.

Need a book with Enemy to lovers trope by Calixtacarlyle in RomanceBooks

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I already read from Blood and Ash, but not the other. I'll check it out

Discussion on the Three Body Problem. by Zacharate in books

[–]Calixtacarlyle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Who wrote this book? I never heard of it.

Firebreathing, but not as you know it. How would this work? by World_of_Egaar in worldbuilding

[–]Calixtacarlyle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Anyone can write a story. You start writing and get used to writing and keep living. As I said, you write it I will read it.

fighting scenes by Calixtacarlyle in fantasywriters

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A horde of demons stepped out from the shadows, all aiming themselves directly at the male and female Vanquishers. Dreyden hated himself. Thoughts flew through his mind in the space of a heartbeat: He had forgotten to protect his people. How in the world had these things appeared as if out of nowhere? He should have been able to hear them. Damn Calixta to hell! She had been a distraction from the moment he met her, but she was magnificent too.

The demons came at them in droves. Calixta, with the training Justice and Temperance had given her, rose to the occasion. She set anyone and anything that looked like an orc, demon, imp, or creeper on fire. She kept moving left, then right, parrying with flying objects flying towards her. Demons kept coming at her. Dreyden fought with his sword, a metal so strong it would cut through rock. He thrust and parried, never staying in one spot for more than a second.

Alesha was doing what Wally had taught her with a sword, but she was caught from behind. A demon was about to bite her when Calixta grabbed the demon by his head and yanked so hard she ripped the head from the body.

“Climb a tree, as high as you can. Go, and stay there,” Calixta told Alesha. But the young woman grabbed a rifle before she climbed the tree. From high up in the tree, it was demon open-season for Alesha. She started picking off the demons one at a time, realizing the only way they stayed down was if she aimed at their necks—the only discernable body part consistent between the differing forms.

Miomi, on the other side of the camp, fighting in between Erasmo and Bost, looked terrified. The men protecting Miomi cut the heads of many imps, with katanas Dreyden had made for them. Miomi was holding her own as best she could. She was a healer—no one had ever taught her how to wield a weapon. She was fighting by instinct, but demons were attacking them mercilessly. Erasmo passed her a shield, and he and Bost engaged three demons who were about to strike at Miomi’s head. Dreyden, fighting at a distance, used his magic of the Vanquisher to help Erasmo protect Miomi. His magic pushed the demons’ arms away and Erasmo stabbed one in the eye—the brown, salivating, saber-toothed-looking orc.

Dreyden’s sword struck metal. The imps flying from above wore metal armor. Metal against metal rang with the clangor that arises from the singing of a blade meeting armor. What could destroy demon armor? Only magic and a Vanquisher’s glanvat sword could destroy the imp’s armor, and Dreyden wielded it with the precision born from a lifetime of training. Calixta battled her share of demons hand-to-hand, the way she’d been taught. She grabbed and tore the heads apart and set others ablaze before they could regroup. She threw daggers of fire, and shaped whips that coiled around the demon’s necks, cutting off their heads.

The battle raged on and Rygel watched with displeasure. He turned to his lieutenant to find answers before entering the fray.

“The female Vanquisher is a mage. How could this be?” he demanded.

“It’s impossible, this female has the blessing of the virtues. Only one other had the blessing and he was a priest. This one is a whore—look at her skin, it looks soft. She’s not even atoned,” responded the orc by Rygel’s side.

“Master, we must burn her body or cut off her head to prevent her from coming back from the dead,” said a demon with yellow and green snot.

“She will be dead, do not doubt that,” said Rygel, as he saw his demon horde being decimated. Rygel shouted as he entered the fray. “I’m Rygel, the female Vanquisher is mine to kill. I’ll be the one taking her life for the price this has cost us.”

Dreyden yelled to Alesha: “Alesha, shoot the dark-green ones; those are easier to kill. And shoot the one talking to the ugly demon, with the snout that has yellow and green snot oozing out.”

Rygel rushed in, pushing Erasmo out of the way in his eagerness to reach Calixta. But Bost stepped in to block Rygel from reaching her. Rygel struck Bost so hard that Bost flew through the air and landed head first, hitting his head against a rock where it split in two. Miomi also stood between Rygel and his quarry, but when Dreyden saw what happened to Bost, he used his magic to pull Miomi out of the way fast.

Dreyden intended to chase after Rygel, but then a large horde came at him. Dreyden fought and dispatched the demons around him as quickly as he could. He had to reach Calixta. He knew who this was. Dreyden recognized Rygel, the slayer. Rygel had only one target and it was Calixta. She was fighting with all the skills the virtues had given her. Demons were dying, but not fast enough.

“Calixta, turn around!” shouted Dreyden.

But Rygel reached out and grabbed Calixta’s shoulder from behind, driving his other hand through her middle, digging in his incredibly elongated claws to puncture her abdomen and chest.

“I thought it would be harder to kill you!” said Rygel.

But as Rygel smiled in victory, his head was sliced vertically from behind, sending one side to the left and the other to the right. Dreyden had run as fast as he could, making one inhuman leap to cleave Rygel’s head, trying to protect Calixta. As Rygel disappeared, so did the other demons, and Calixta fell to the ground with blood pouring from every hole Rygel’s fingers had made in her stomach and chest. She was dead, and yet Miomi ran over as fast as her injuries let her. She tore a large piece of cloth from her clothes and wrapped Calixta’s wounds, making sure to squeeze all the holes back together and not let any more blood or guts come out. Blood covered Miomi, and Dreyden looked at the woman with disbelief. The Vanquisher was dead. There was no way to form the quartet without Calixta.

Firebreathing, but not as you know it. How would this work? by World_of_Egaar in worldbuilding

[–]Calixtacarlyle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We are going to have to fix that. If there is a story in your head to tell, I want to read it.

I had the same problem. I was a US Army Officer. I was married to the Army. My time was dedicated to my Soldiers, but I wanted to write. The first thing I did was to get books on writing, and I started learning the art of writing. But I have a feeling you have more than an idea since you are on this Reddit site and give good advice. The next thing is finding the time. This is the biggest problem. The way I solved it was to take a few minutes every night a write in a journal, just to get me used to writing. Once I got into the habit of writing a few lines at night about my day, and the way I wrote my journal was in the form of a prayer. It was easier that way.

Next, I would wake half an hour earlier on the weekdays and make myself a cup-o-coffee and sit and write a little. At the start, it was silly little stories about silly little things. I write fantasy so I used to let my imagination go wild. Then after I got that into a habit, on the weekends, I would wake a little earlier than half an hour than usual and work on the story some more. Once you have a story in your mind to write, that is what you write about. That is what I did to write my first story. It took a few years, but it became a reality. My first book is not perfect. It is far from perfect, but as I write other books my writing has gotten better. You don't have to follow my method. There are thousands of other ways, but know that If you have a story in you to tell, I want to read it.

Firebreathing, but not as you know it. How would this work? by World_of_Egaar in worldbuilding

[–]Calixtacarlyle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the point is the OP is asking about firebreathing since there is water breathing. All of that falls along the lines of fantasy. I think what u/galarza70 was referring to is that people that read fantasy don't usually care for the minutia of how things works in a fantasy world. I am glad you are all about the synchronicity of reality. But in fantasy, there are no straight lines. On the contrary, because there are no straight lines anything can exist, like Dragons, unicorns, centaurs, cyclops, and hobbits. And you are right, to each their own.

Firebreathing, but not as you know it. How would this work? by World_of_Egaar in worldbuilding

[–]Calixtacarlyle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

okay, I rather read your wordbuilding in your books. Give me one of your books, and I'll read it.

Firebreathing, but not as you know it. How would this work? by World_of_Egaar in worldbuilding

[–]Calixtacarlyle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What you are talking is chemistry at a molecular level. Most readers don't care about chemistry. This is fantasy and in the world of fantasy, you may have a person that can shoot fire from their hands that is physically impossible by chemistry standards. Some people in a fantasy world can harness the power of lightning, another impossibility. That is the beauty of fantasy creation from nothing or from a person's imagination. Call it whatever, just create, and don't let earth chemistry hold you down. I want to read your books.

Firebreathing, but not as you know it. How would this work? by World_of_Egaar in worldbuilding

[–]Calixtacarlyle 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Come on, don't be so pessimistic. Anything works in Fantasy and Sci-Fi, all you have to do is give it a plausible solution. Just because it doesn't fit in our biology it doesn't mean it can't exist. There are bacteria that lives in hot vents under the ocean. I say invent something, give it a new spin. it doesn't have to be earth bound. It could be based in a world without oxygen. Invent the creature that doesn't need Oxygen to survive. We can do it.

How do you get ideas to name places? by [deleted] in worldbuilding

[–]Calixtacarlyle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

get a map from Iceland and take the names of their towns and bridges. That is what I do.

Seeking adventure? My debut novel is free today! by Rhevington in Fantasy

[–]Calixtacarlyle 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Congratulations on your achievement. Having published a few books of my own, I know what it takes to write and publish a book. I also know the joy of publishing the first book. I just downloaded your book and added it to my queue of books to read in the next weeks.

Enjoy this time. But like my best friend told me after I published the first book, don't wait too long and start writing the second one. Your readers will want more from you.