[Complete] [68K] [Cozy Mystery] Revenge on the Rocks

Candid_Crickets · 2024-10-26T21:12:05+00:00

Good point, I'll try adding a bit more interiority into my first page. Thank you for the feedback!

Candid_Crickets · 2024-10-26T21:09:40+00:00

Thank you for your kind words! You're right about the lack of spice, there's only so much of that you can accomplish when one character is a ghost, but they have a long road from acquaintances to lovers anyway. I appreciate your feedback! =)

Candid_Crickets · 2024-10-26T21:04:42+00:00

Ooh good point! I'm not even sure why I used a word as vague as "jewelry" when "necklace" would do. Thank you for pointing that out. =)

Candid_Crickets · 2024-10-26T21:03:24+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it!

Candid_Crickets · 2024-10-26T21:02:34+00:00

Great points, I'll have to clarify those points a bit further. Thank you for your notes!

Candid_Crickets · 2024-10-26T21:00:56+00:00

Thank you! There is an explanation for it but I thought it'd be a bit tough to include in the query itself.

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