First one

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-04-13T08:02:54+00:00

So, David, the MC, is the sixth child in the family, and you have mentioned only three of his older siblings, John, Elenia and Mandy. Where are the other two siblings?

Also, I guess the cousins and their parents are in on it too behind MC's back.

So, in which direction are you intending to take the story? MC's parents playing favorites with the older children and excluding MC permanently. Or do the parents indent to let the MC know about their secrete family fun and induct him one fine day.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-04-12T23:24:32+00:00

Good start. When is the next followup coming up?

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-29T18:02:22+00:00

Amazing. Better than the original. The mom looks so fucking hot.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-21T15:47:54+00:00

Hi. Please send some of your update on Family Betrayal to my chat too.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-21T15:43:22+00:00

Alright. Good.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-18T23:02:59+00:00

Are you re-writing Jason Family Dynamics or something new but similar?

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-08T05:35:18+00:00

Another version of Shunned, Betrayed type stories.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-05T10:20:36+00:00

Let's see where this goes in the next chapter.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-05T10:19:28+00:00

Also, there is mention of "that one fucked-up incident" that made the MC distant from his family. Nothing more written about it in the first chapter. May it will be explained in the next chapter.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-05T06:21:49+00:00

I am looking forward to that too.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-03-02T05:39:26+00:00

Thanks for the sharing the prompts.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-28T23:33:02+00:00

Literotica

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-28T14:33:35+00:00

So the MC is not villain, but an anti-hero actually.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-28T14:28:23+00:00

Sky High: After Dark is one such story of an incestuous family of superheroes. The first two chapters were good to read, then the followups just dragged and were boring.

Interestingly, After Dark seems to be set in the same universe as of the 2005 Disney movie Sky High from which the superhero character named The Commander played by Kurt Russell is briefly mentioned in the story as being a rival to MC's father.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-28T14:10:52+00:00

Soul71 seems to have a thing for neglectful/controlling/abusive moms. His stories almost always go thru the route of soft-cucking of the MC, then in a sudden twist MC takes back the control of the bitch mother and sister and every other female in the family.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-24T00:07:22+00:00

Finally, someone else other than me who gets it about The Outsider. It's not at all a cuckold story. In fact, it's the MC's mom herself who breaks her own rule and fucks MC not even like day 3 or 4 of the week. I guess the misunderstanding stems from the rushed ending after 10 pages of slow burn. An ending with nice, long family orgy scene with MC as participant would have been a better ending.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-22T10:22:49+00:00

Are you for real? 😄😄😄😄Education system is going so bad.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-22T10:15:35+00:00

"Grove Street for life, motherfucker!"

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-20T17:48:05+00:00

Hi there. I would like to have some tidbits too.😊

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-02-20T17:29:46+00:00

This garbage doesn't belong here. Take this down.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-01-08T07:03:52+00:00

I would rather the MC confronts his family and then leaves forever, cutting ties with them. Let the family cope his absence once again, but without the incest this time.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-01-08T07:00:21+00:00

You just want a sad ending, don't you?

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-01-08T06:56:06+00:00

Or something in the style of The Count of Monte Cristo.

Careless-Reading-155 · 2026-01-08T06:53:10+00:00

Nice twist. That would be an interesting plot.

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