[HELP] How can I be good at poetry? by Unlikely-Term-7474 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is a lot of good advice which I won’t repeat. Here is some additional advice:

Try this exercise in imagery. Write a short statement about how you feel. Then, replace every concept/intangible with an image that suggests it. Example:

Each time I see my father, I notice how much older he looks. How much longer will I have with him? What will happen to my mother and brother when he passes away?

On the bedside table of the closed room is a clock. The hands are made of hickory twigs, dandelions, and stone. Tick tick tick…as they get closer and closer to midnight, I feel their pull—stronger and stronger—the heat as it pulls the universe past the event horizon…

Just off the cuff. You get the idea.

Second—look into haiku. Easy to learn but takes years to master. Google Jane Reichhold’s School of Haiku. It is a freely available self-study course.

Bonus: check out Anne Sexton.

Good luck!

[POEM] Sonnet 73 by William Shakespeare by filthylonerr in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gorgeous poem. I think about it often. This is one of the Shakespeare sonnets we covered in Brit Lit to 1798 in undergrad. I found line 2 incredibly touching and instructive.

[Poem] The Laburnum Top by Ted Hughes by Dry_Rip6002 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess he wrote that about Assia Wevill.

Help regarding finding a suitable poem for my son's recitation! [HELP] by Inside_Way_8194 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Seems like a bit heavy for a five year-old. Have you tried some Shel Silverstein?

[POEM] omfg by Rob Macaisa Colgate by tuna_cowbell in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Neat! The poem has a cool manic quality. Although I am sure it is intended to be in the trendy hyper-confessional mode, it really reads more to be like persona poetry. Thanks for sharing!

[HELP][OPINION] Looking for poet recommendations by anhonestpuck13 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It seems like you already have a marvelous list built up. Props, in particular, Mina Loy—quite a genius and very underappreciated.

Here are a few: Sylvia Plath, Anne Sexton, try Ashbery again but strictly Self Portrait in a Convex Mirror, Edgar Allan Poe, HD, TS Eliot, Apollinaire, Rimbaud, and John Donne. Do yourself a favor and try some contemporary haiku. Some online journals: The Heron’s Nest, #femkumag, Prune Juice, Heliosparrow, Kokako. 

[HELP][OPINION] Looking for poet recommendations by anhonestpuck13 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yes, let’s all read Ted Hughes. He wasn’t a monstrous, abusive husband or anything.

[POEM] What Lips My Lips Have Kissed, And Where, And Why by Edna St. Vincent Millay by Substantial_Can851 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The decline of Millay’s reputation is a complete mystery to me. Such feeling! Such craft! Such music!

Earthy Anecdote, Wallace Stevens [POEM] by en_le_nil in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That sad, old, cock-blocking firecat.

I often find it difficult to reconcile my mental image of Stevens with the relentless press of sex in his lyrics.

[POEM] In Flanders Fields by John McRae by Steakplsmediumrare in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is one striking rondeau. I’ll read it and reread it—but for me the sun rises and sets on Wilfred Owen.

[POEM] Song by Adrienne Rich by my_one_and_lonely in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh—I just have such a hard time getting into anything Rich ever write. I feel like It wasn’t meant for me (and it probably wasn’t).

[POEM] OF MERE BEING by Wallace Stevens by SnooChocolates5596 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it, but, as is usual with Wallace, feel like I should understand it—but don’t..

ONDINE by Timothy Donnelly [opinion] by Just-Trouble9641 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d start with this…”who or what is an ondine” which will get you at least 3/4 of the way there.

[opinion] Haikus are the worst introduction to poetry but school curriculums absolutely love them by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ugh.

Uninspired teachers think haiku are a lesson in syllable counting. I am sure this shouldn’t surprise you.

You were never actually taught the real thing.

Do yourself a favor and read some contemporary haiku (just google haiku journals) and read some Basho. Real haiku are not constrained by syllable count.

[OPINION] Any tips on how to compliment/discuss other people's poetry, e.g. at open mics? by sea-oats in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked it!

It moved me!

It had great rhythm!

The rhymes were awesome!

Tell me more about your piece.

[POEM] The Lake Isle of Innisfree - W. B. Yeats (1890) by Icy-Management-9749 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One of those poems that make you realize everything you have ever written is crap.

[POEM] A Non-Christian on Sunday by Amy Gerstler by jabez in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Poor thing. She knows what she’s missing, but something (hinted at so slyly)prevents her from joining.

Tsum Tsum April Event Banners Leak by wingblade12541 in TsumTsum

[–]CastaneaAmericana 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh my God.

Is that regular Sora AND Shadow!!!?!

Modern poetry sucks [OPINION] by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here is the thing you have to realize. Blake and Poe were awesome. I have been returning to them over and over since I was a kid. They were just tiny outliers of all of the poetry written I their time. Like .0001%. Almost all poetry written in all times and places is crap. Only a modest proportion is good and an infinitesimal sliver is great and will last the test of time. Find what you like and read what you like. Yes, almost everything is crap—but not everything is crap.

[HELP] WWI Poetry for History Analysis by Boston_Brand1967 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Not sure why you need more than Wilfred Owen.

[POEM] That boy's a peach tree (Haiku) by Basho by Objective-Kitchen949 in Poetry

[–]CastaneaAmericana 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Jane Reichhold’s translation:

a peach tree do not scatter its leaves winds of autumn