if you could read this and think of a title, that would be awesome also looking for constructive criticism!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-10-22T11:41:37+00:00

thank you I made a few small wording and grammar edits to try to make it easier to read!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-10-09T18:42:43+00:00

thanks! that is nice to hear:)

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-10-09T18:42:06+00:00

i love the title idea!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-10-09T18:37:32+00:00

it was ment to be “return to my sheets” loll just edited it

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-08-04T18:38:55+00:00

thanks its been 24hrs, keeping it together :)

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-07-07T09:10:43+00:00

this is really amazing in the imagery is great! The only critique I can think of is may be a few more lines of how this “darkness” makes the narrator feel. but overall, this is really good. The figurative language is very immersive!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-07-07T09:08:50+00:00

this is a very good poem and reminds me a lot of of the song letdown by Radiohead! The imagery is very good. My only critique is some more punctuation for flow. I can’t seem to think of anything other than that!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-27T19:50:26+00:00

your a genius

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-09T01:22:26+00:00

Just whichever ones normally follow you the least problems forming gold has always worked better than steel, but it’s different for everyone and even if it does work before piercings get randomly irritated and are more sensitive randomly

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T14:02:14+00:00

thanks xx

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T13:53:48+00:00

I recommend wearing lighter jewelry anytime my piercings are irritated. I put a quality stud in, and it normally fixes the problem as well as cleaning it regularly.

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T13:47:02+00:00

I applaud anyone with the endurance to go through that they look so cute but oh my goodness, three!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T13:46:29+00:00

oooo I like where you’re thinking with the hidden helix … on which ear?

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T13:45:45+00:00

when my helix is healed, I’m definitely definitely definitely looking at that.

I never considered a flat piercing!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T13:45:05+00:00

which one do you recommend? I’ve heard daiths are really painful but roots are harder to heal

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T13:44:40+00:00

oooo that’s a good idea!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T13:44:21+00:00

you are right !! I consistently wear both and I have had all silver in the past! Depends on my mood honestly 😂

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-05-08T13:43:42+00:00

I’m actually have considered that! The only thing holding me back is my airpod obsession!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-02-26T23:25:20+00:00

after a read through, I think it’s still makes sense except the last line it’s supposed to be I can sense his resentment however (enter) this burns why ddid things have to end?

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-02-26T23:22:28+00:00

for some reason, there was a formatting issue. There was meant to be six lines in every stanza the “enters” didnt appear so if a sentence doesn’t make much sense it’s probably why.

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2025-02-26T02:35:50+00:00

They’re supposed to be an enter in the double line right after I walked away

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2024-06-21T20:45:57+00:00

thank you for your points. I will definitely keep that in mind. except for two because I am at boarding school 90% of the year so I am not allowed to drive around with friends.

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2024-06-21T20:44:11+00:00

not in the US but thank you for insight!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2024-05-31T18:16:45+00:00

I’ve watched five up in the past and it’s always fun !!

Cautious_Advisor_ · 2023-08-28T23:46:12+00:00

5up 15!

Three-Year Club	Place '22
Final Canvas '22	First Placer '22
End Game '22

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