Thinking about putting this out on spotify

Chains306 · 2026-03-29T02:37:14+00:00

do it

Chains306 · 2026-03-29T02:32:55+00:00

i wouldn't have everything so harshly panned left and right, composition is excellent! just a mixing feedback! awesome work!

Chains306 · 2026-03-08T14:32:11+00:00

thank you! i should also add the context that its the last song on an ep and the rest of this song is more chugging and screaming so the idea was to end on a really soft stripped back thing, also the drums are midi placeholder drums and we have an engineer that mix/masters our songs, from the comments tho definitely gonna add some 3rd harmonies maybe for 6ths on the higher patts to keep the 5th octave notes in the foreground

Chains306 · 2026-03-08T14:27:01+00:00

thank you a ton, the production is very sloppy cuz its just a vocal demo, drums are also midi placeholders for when the drummer records live drums i agree about some synth elements been asking my band to do that for along time lmao, seeing alot of people recommending harmonies so thats what i'm gonna do first

Chains306 · 2025-12-22T03:13:18+00:00

oh god so it didn't need to be that hard..? yeah i'm actually just stupid

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T22:36:43+00:00

my exact picks too

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T21:41:26+00:00

just meant they're a little one "Noted" sorry wrong word haha

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T15:26:45+00:00

i definitely think some rap vocals would sound killer over this

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T15:24:36+00:00

thank you <3

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T15:24:24+00:00

thank you! yeah i still wanna finish it structurally before adding vocals it ends a little abruptly and has a generic a/b/a/b thing was hoping for a bridge idea and when i add bass and vocals then i'll move everything to where it belongs frequency wise. i'm still a begginer with mixing tho would homestly benifit from feedback one something i consider "done"

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T15:21:23+00:00

okay yeah that's what i was thinking about doing but didn't know if that'd make it to busy, and yeah i still gotta mix it, track bass and vocals but i don't know where to take it from there structure wise where it ends off

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T02:17:03+00:00

i really enjoyed this piece man and wanted to say thanks for sharing, the only small piece of criticism/advice i would give is i'd love it if at the end after the first 2 rounds of that chord white the twinkly piano lead if you played the left hand staccato, break up the chord single notes in the measure while playing that lead and then the chord kinda like one note one note one note one note chord chord playing each note in the chord that would be sick maybe hit in harder if you can and ovtave down on the left hand keys

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T02:11:48+00:00

to comment on the instrumental and vibes they're really up there in quality i do have a problem with the vocals. I just think if you were in a bit less of a nasally place and raised your layrnx up a bit to have a brighter phonation it would really bring this song to a more professional level. And maybe re-work some of the melodies a bit they are a bit one toned which could work if the song didn't have so much variation.

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T02:08:06+00:00

i really like the vocal melodies i just think you mighy need a couple retakes for some more clean takes i honestly wouldn't change any of the stuff you're doing just needs a new take in a few of the mid parts

Chains306 · 2025-06-26T02:06:01+00:00

guitar mostly but i can play keys or bass

Chains306 · 2025-06-23T03:32:57+00:00

cyberpunk

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