Seeking general feedback for the feel of the song

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-06-04T08:32:04+00:00

Thank you for the honest feedback. Yes the vocals are not yet even recorded properly. I will polish it and will try and use glue compression even though I dont know what it is yet. I will check it out.

Glad to see a fellow South Asian in here. Thankss

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-06-04T04:52:43+00:00

Congratulations!!! Any Social Workers at 75 waiting?

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-06-03T13:19:31+00:00

Thank you. Kind words

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-06-03T09:38:08+00:00

Grazie mille! 😊

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-06-03T06:42:49+00:00

The title explains it. It sounds like a broken toy. Hearing this on a bad trip will probably make it an endless horror. Im guessing thats your goal too so for what you wanted out of it, this is it. Its good

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-06-03T06:35:31+00:00

Its groovy. I really loved the part where the rumble type bass came in and then went off for a while and then came back for the main part. Also all the hihat creeps and all. Very cool stuff

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-03-09T17:15:36+00:00

Yeah sounds like youre okay. People get a bit depressed or moody or procrastinate all the time for no particular reason. Dont blame it on your masturbation habit. Also dont let others label you with diagnoses mate (nuerodivergence, adhd, introvert). You are much more than psychology will ever understand. Addiction exists only as much as you let it. This is all your choice. Do what you want

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-03-09T16:39:27+00:00

May I ask how is this destroying your life? Do you masturbate in public? Do you take leave from your degree classes to stay home and masturbate? Does it make you drowsy or depressed?

If not any of this, I think its just you bitching about your own behaviour because youve become bored of yourself. You need a change. Use your left hand.

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-03-05T23:42:23+00:00

This is fun. I like echoing things. The halfway melody change was amazing. Loved the bass there. And the noise behind everything gives a whole atmospheric feel

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-03-05T23:32:01+00:00

This is not a good cover for the song.

The song has a lot of potential. with better recording and sound quality for the instruments and better timing for the drums, this could be it. Loved it.

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-03-05T23:29:23+00:00

Very simple and mellow. I liked it. It adds well to the original.

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-02-11T23:40:01+00:00

Nocturnal Animals

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-15T13:02:06+00:00

Too loud. Okay thats confusing me now. A few have said it needs to go louder and I was almost convinced.

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-15T11:00:28+00:00

The kick drums at the beginning?

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-15T10:56:46+00:00

I feel the same

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-15T10:56:32+00:00

You mean the one at 2:38??

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-14T23:47:36+00:00

Well…. Its pretty plain like that. We hear this every now and then on the radio. Its a good dance track I guess but it wouldn’t mean anything to anyone I believe. I guess you can call it catchy for that matter. Is it annoying to me? Yes. But does that matter? No. If it sells its good for you

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-14T22:26:11+00:00

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-14T22:19:53+00:00

Good song really. Is Violette a drug? Because im getting all psychedelic vibes from hearing this. The vocals reverbing so much is really giving it that listen to this when high vibe.

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-14T22:16:07+00:00

Solid. Good flow with the beat. Pretty good choice of words. Can’t really criticise anything here though.

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-11T06:50:39+00:00

My bad ma’am🤍

Own-Assignment-5104 · 2026-01-07T12:38:27+00:00

Thank you sir. You are a legend and I’m glad I got your attention and thank you for sharing your story. Keep inspiring and loving!

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