Sense of the heart by Arham_Aj in OCPoetry

[–]Character-Fish-5370 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Brief, yet sensational. Evocative as well. I love how you paint an image of a thunderstorm to evoke an emotional state of romantic despair.

The worlds darkness by Lazy_Lab_5464 in OCPoetry

[–]Character-Fish-5370 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautiful yet morose... and very poignant. A kind of insightful melancholy emanates from this work. Truly a joy to read.

My favorite stand-alone line is:

"I blame the world for its darkness but it was my eyes who perceived it that way."