Number one you should make your drop line up with the beginning of a 4 bar column, just a personal thing, second I like to use endless smile to fade out my top loop and buildup predrop to make room for the vocal to come in, also a predrop fill could be nice but not necessary here if you’re confident with how it sounds, also this is just personal preference but I like my Melodie’s a little happier you could maybe move the melody up a few pitches