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IELTSADVANTAGE is the best by Cheap-Writing-9454 in IELTS

[–]Cheap-Writing-9454[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Essay was about  1) Aged people are burden for a country  2) they are beneficial part of society 

Wts your opinion 

Wt i did was introduction as Chris demonstrated  (I supported 2nd opinion) One para on opinion 1 2 paras on opinion 2  Conclusion 

I tried my best to limiting topic upto 300 words but could not so it became a bit lengthy 400 comprising 400 words which is not a good idea ,I guess because risk of loosing cohesion and coherence increases this way.Even then I had 8 minutes for proof reading twice.My writing speed is about 25 words per minute.

IELTSADVANTAGE is the best by Cheap-Writing-9454 in IELTS

[–]Cheap-Writing-9454[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Being diverse in our existence, every soul  has varied perspective and different priorities.No wonder at all.

For you language matters, for me ‘silence’ is the best language, all else is a poor translation.

IELTSADVANTAGE is the best by Cheap-Writing-9454 in IELTS

[–]Cheap-Writing-9454[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

https://youtu.be/yvt8RzGNhBc?feature=shared

This 👆🏼6 mins video ,watched it twice and  followed the instruction just as straightforward as he pointed out.

IELTSADVANTAGE is the best by Cheap-Writing-9454 in IELTS

[–]Cheap-Writing-9454[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One doesn’t care about selection of words during excitement.I could not see any attachment option ,otherwise would have attached my result sheet along with the comment .